All Comments on 'Don't You Forget About Me'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
great story!

very well done! Reminds me of New City Vendetta by LIC (available on JRParz's Hall of Fame website)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
changed

i used to love your stories, but this one was a heart breaker! usually you write wonderful stores, this time it was so horribly sad. please do not write more like this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Christ.

That was a depressing wank.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Incredible! Wonderful in a way one could see so many metaphors. Strange aftertaste. Who is Beth?

PieCreeperPieCreeperover 1 year ago

This is one of those things that are immensely hot when you're horny then when you're done, you question your sanity. 5 stars! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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