by JukeboxEMCSA
very well done! Reminds me of New City Vendetta by LIC (available on JRParz's Hall of Fame website)
i used to love your stories, but this one was a heart breaker! usually you write wonderful stores, this time it was so horribly sad. please do not write more like this.
Incredible! Wonderful in a way one could see so many metaphors. Strange aftertaste. Who is Beth?
This is one of those things that are immensely hot when you're horny then when you're done, you question your sanity. 5 stars! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐