All Comments on 'Dori Comes to Visit 02'

Why so long to complete this story?

Dori Comes to Visit is in fact a gripping drama, and the author weaves the plot with great skill, holding the reader's attention throughout. This story is greatly improved from the original, and it starts out seemingly as an erotic couplings story, However, by the end of the second chapter, it is most obvious that it is really a Romance story, and an excellent one at that. One can only wish that this talented author will publish more stories in the Romance genre, perhaps the most neglected one on the Literotica site.