All Comments on 'Double Dipping Ch. 06'

by Erlikkhan

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
great stuff

I really hope you feel like continuing this story. still lots you can do with it and great writing and plot

BMW75RTBMW75RTalmost 15 years ago
Glad to see you are posting stories again

After a long absence it is good to be able to read your thoughts once again. Keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nie Job

I really liked reading your Double Dipping series. I think the only thing that would have made it more intense would be a little more coaxing where virgins were characters. Nice writing though, I look forward to reading the rest of what you write!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Did you have an Editor?

You might consider getting one. You have great raw talent, but need a good second set of eyes to polish it off.

Good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

I gave you a 1 why you didn't finish it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Need more

Great series can't wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Enjoyed this series of stories but I think you brought in too many women into the mix. You could have called it quintuple dipping or something like that .

WittonWittonover 1 year ago

It seems to be the work of a teenage boy with a good grammar- and spell-checker

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

More more more don't stop now!!!

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