by Erlikkhan
I really hope you feel like continuing this story. still lots you can do with it and great writing and plot
After a long absence it is good to be able to read your thoughts once again. Keep up the great work
I really liked reading your Double Dipping series. I think the only thing that would have made it more intense would be a little more coaxing where virgins were characters. Nice writing though, I look forward to reading the rest of what you write!
You might consider getting one. You have great raw talent, but need a good second set of eyes to polish it off.
Good luck!
Enjoyed this series of stories but I think you brought in too many women into the mix. You could have called it quintuple dipping or something like that .
It seems to be the work of a teenage boy with a good grammar- and spell-checker