All Comments on 'Double Duty'

nothing quite like the excitement of a new story. I look forward to more entries.

Really liked it and would love to see a couple chapter story for the month she's there.

Great beginning to this story great writing as always.

5 stars

What a nice fantasy. I was wondering if B&S were going to seduce E. Thanks for writing and posting. A wonderful read!

I am in the film/tv industry. If you were talking about the Director of Photography as the DOP, people in the business call them a DP. Not joking, they do.

I know, minor. But thought you should know.

Very enjoyable, 4 stars.

please continue this story, I loved it. I like the real life aspects added to stories.

Most definitely would like to see where this goes, these two are interesting, although so far Eddie is largely an unknown, as we really don't know anything about him except he doesn't drink alcohol and is willing to be a designated driver.

Very nice story I give it a 4 on the 'Budweiser Scale' !!!

Comptetely absorbing writing.. ..

A sexy and fun situation, with high quality writing. Words that just flow off the page and fill my mind with visuals.

Looking forward to the next bit.

This was a very enjoyable story for me, good job!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. The action was hot but believable, the characters seemed very down to earth and likeable, and the plot was light but pure fantasy. I especially liked the short interlude with Scarlett, as it added a little more fantasy without being ridiculous. Good writing! I can't wait for more stories like this from you.

Glad there’s another part coming.

I couldn’t help thinking throughout that there’s a precipitous end coming when he realizes there’s no long term future there. I think he’s setting himself up for a terrible ending.

Putting myself in the story I realized I would never gone after her because all I could see was that I’d never be in her class & the end would break my heart.

Bill S.

That was fun

This needs a follow up at her place or his!

A great read as always.

Another good story, looking forward to reading the next installment.