All Comments on 'Double Helix Ch. 02'

Excellent!

This story has more potential than any other I've seen in the Sci-Fi section this year. Keep it up! Can't wait to see where you go with this story. The character development is awesome.

I'm not very patient, but this story is worth waiting for. Glad that you are continuing to tell us about the other reality. In some sense it is almost like the world is trying to recover from some great wide spread disaster. Please continue with with your work.

Can't wait for another chapter.

Good second chapter! I am so happy that you continued! can't wait for the next one!

love,

Thom

A really good story that's updated quickly? Someone pinch me, I must be dreaming!

I really appreciate the positive response. Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts. I am still editing part 3 but hope to have that submitted soon.

Wow.. this is good. Read the first chapter mini synopsis and wondered how the story would be and it ended up exceeding my expectations. The dialogue and interactions between characters is very enjoyable and the world you set up very interesting. Really well written and the actual erotica is great. Top quality stuff right here. Can't stand reading something new only to find out badly written erotica is the priority over any resemblance of a good story so it's always nice to find something more up my alley. Thanks.

Very good, funny how truth can be stranger than fiction sometimes, a story where a genetically engineered disease destroys food supplies, and in real life we’re still going through the death throes of COVID, a genetically engineered disease that escaped from a lab in China that’s killed millions. How portentous.

Another great chapter. Your pacing is awesome. It feels very natural, right down the way men can say the wrong thing without even trying. It is very believable.

Ah yes, foot in mouth disease. He obviously hates himself a good deal. A state I am all too familiar with. But manageable once you realize it.

Tossed not tussled by the way. Tossed is hair tussled is fighting.