All Comments on 'Double Helix Ch. 07'

by FelHarper

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Rolly_J_McGeeRolly_J_McGeeabout 10 years ago
Aw, man... Miss Cliff Hanger just stomped right on my nuts! :-(

I love your story! Your cliff-hangers, however, are just plain mean! Hopefully you won't leave us hangin' too terribly long. In the meantime, please don't let that be the last we see of our dear, sweet, wonderfully badass Sasha! I'll get down on my knees and beg if I have to. ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Thanks for continuing your story.

I was getting worried!!

drmrbludrmrbluabout 10 years ago
Good show

I'd like to second the comment, it is good to see this story continue. Please continue as opportunity permits. Thanks again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Amazing series.

I am enthralled by your work and the quality of your writing. Absolutely fantastic!

SvenosSvenosabout 10 years ago
Holy fuck

HOLY SHIT

HOLY MOTHERFUCKING SHIT

THAT WAS FUCKING EPIC

WRITE MORE! WRITE LIKE A MANIAC!!!

JUST WRITE, YOU HAVE 2 WEEKS

WRITE!!!

Thom_the_gleemanThom_the_gleemanabout 10 years ago
keep going please!

This is such a good story! I love it, and the wait is excruciating ;)

Please continue and be proud of this piece of writing!

Thom

FelHarperFelHarperabout 10 years agoAuthor

Sorry for the delay. I have a really good excuse, trust me.

Next part is on the way. Going through editing, then submission.

jansen_janjansen_janabout 10 years ago
Great read

I really love your stories. Normally I read Literotica to get hot. Suddenly there is this whole world of other emotions. Sometimes I didn't want to continue because of the lurking doom... Thanks.

ArcTalyxArcTalyxalmost 5 years ago
Intense

This is one of the best series on Lit. The build up is so intense my heart rate actually increased by the end of this chapter. Absolutely amazing writing.

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12/12 Update: Double Helix 24 is moving along. It’s one of those chapters where I’ve had to rewrite several times for everything to make sense. Sometimes the plot flows like a river. This is one of those times where it hacks and slashes like a gory horror flick. I’ll get there...

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