All Comments on 'Double or Nothing'

please continue the tale

excellent loved this story!!!!!

A very nice job, sir. I liked the plot as well as your descriptions.

Loves it. :)

This was an excellent wonderful sweet story. Please write more

great story. please do continue to let them have further adventures

A very nice combination of a teenage story with an erotic plot

Its kinda boring I guess having stereotypes like jock and hippy chick falling for each other. But I guess the mark of a great storyteller is being able to tell a cliche into a new and wonderful story. Good job sir.

Nice story, although the propaganda about going vegetarian making you stronger was hilariously childish.

I liked it! 5*

Sweet story, and well-written. And I love a happy ending (double entendre definitely intended!). Five stars.

environmental activist told me all I needed to know about an empty head female. vegetarian is NOT healthy nor is eating too much meat. BUT they can live a full life (not without problems for long time vege only practice) thanks to a great medical system.

He said he was gonna grudge fuck her but then turned into a little sissy and 'didn't want hurt her"? Disappointing, good idea but bad sex scene...

I'm impressed by the subtlety of how you put this one together. As their rivalry goes further and further, they rediscover their previous feelings and affection for one another that they had buried. He might have started with the idea of being rough but Jeff can't bring himself to be because he realizes how much he cares for Melody after all. A very sweet love story in the end. Nice work.

Which is it?

Melody's family grew up across the street, but just before this story, Melody's house was hit by a Russian satellite that fell out of orbit and destroyed their house, so the family bought the house next door to Jeff. So technically, they grew up across the street from each other, but at the time of the story they were next door neighbors.

Great story, really fun and sexy!

Cute!