All Comments on 'Double the Pleasure'

"peach", "chamber", "gash" - make up your mind. Those words are also some of the stupidest and least arousing you can use for the female genitalia.

I, for one, have no complaint over your choice of words. The entire story worked well.

Very good choice of words that used to describe wantonness in fucking but somehow have emerged in our society as non-political in nature. A very erotic story and perhaps they really need to think about the future, which would be very erotic if the thought about developing growing bellies.

Your words were fine... the story was hot... not everybody uses the same vocabulary to describe hot pussy... Please keep writing because your style, grammar and story lines are much, much better than most of the junk that's posted here.

your writing was hot the story was incredible keep writing stories you can really tell a story

between sex and pregnancy go out in the 1960's. It certainly was gone by the time I came of age in the '70's. Any responsible girl/woman would not let herself get knocked up - after all there is the pill.

However, since the '70's STD's have become the concern of choice in real life. No responsible girl/woman fucks anyone but their husband or significant other without protection - and then only if they know their significant other is not screwing around.

I loved the story. The conflict between faithfulness and succumbing to temptation was very well illustrated.

Your choice of euphemism is fine and denotes a level of sophistication that is apparently lacking in Norway. I’m sure they would prefer the words “intercourse” to “sex” and “vagina” to "peach", "chamber", or "gash". After all it’s just so sexy to read “vagina” twenty times in a sexy story, right? (Please note then ignore the sarcasm dripping from your screens!”

I thought everything was wrote very well. Keep up the good work!

Superb imagery, and lots of it. Such a delightful tryst...