All Comments on 'Down at the Twist and Shout Ch. 02'

by beachbum1958

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

C'est bon

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
This is a real tease.

It feels like we are watching as the fuse is lit. There is no question of if there will be an explosion just how soon, how big, and what will be left?

kurinaxkurinaxover 6 years ago
This is really getting good

The sex is hot as always, but honestly the story is what I’m looking forward to the most. Can’t wait to see what’s coming next. Keep these chapters coming as quickly as you can.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Really liked this keep it coming

olblueyesolblueyesalmost 6 years ago

well written, well paced, fascinated by the cajun lingo,,someone knows their lousiana heritage,,the relationship is romantic, the sex is fine but its the story that is holding my interest.

linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago
Loving This One

Both of these first two parts have been exceptionally good and I can't wait to read the next part.

JagnagJagnagalmost 5 years ago
Such an enthralling story :)

Im spellbound .... 5*x 5*

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
5 stars again

i'll admit - i struggle thru the cajun dialect, but this is one great story. well written, suspenseful, and good sex. perfect!

DevilbobyDevilbobyabout 3 years ago

Your commentators are right on the 💰 BB I agree with all of them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

At a sister me and my brother though it was anther great story on how hot a relationship between a brother and sister can get with the love they show for each other thank you keep up the great work

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A small town mid-way between Cannes and St. Tropez, on what used to be called the French Riviera. I have the Mediterranean to look at from the front of our house, a lagoon filled with flamingos at the rear, and our own stretch of beach where we keep our peace and the tourists...