All Comments on 'Down by the River'

Not sure what happened, but the story is being resubmitted, just ignore it for now. Sorry for the trouble.

Great story, i'll be sure to read this again.

I loved the setting and the way you built the story. You gave us just enough information about the characters to make them realistic.

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story...

RecHiker

YOu could have make more trips to the river and a little more anticipation especially with the old man in the boat. still a solid 5