All Comments on 'Downstairs'

I've seen places like you describe - you describe so well - and I've wondered about the raw desires that fill us. To take or be taken whether in clean beds with familiar lovers or filthy toilets with anonymous strangers.

Your description of your intoxication/drugged state and your desire for oblivion were very personal things.

It was a very wonderful story. Thank you so much.

The risky mood and careful detail, the intoxication and anonymity, the decay and next-day aftermath. It turns in all the right places. It feels useless to tell you how much I liked this story, since you probably already know.

litpervgrrl writes fabulous nasty stories. This is one of the best. For a girl seemingly w/o great experience, she has a vivid imagination.

Nasty and Rude...but hot!

Disturbing. Nasty. Torrid. Incredibly arousing. Girl of my dreams / girl of my nightmares

litpervgrrl, Your stories are always great. I really loved this one and would like another bathroom episode. -- Lindsey

i love the way you describe the womans pussy...tasting of sweat. urine and sex. many times i have met a woman and had sex with her in a park, in my car, in the alley behind the bar or if we make it at her home or mind. the aroma and taste of a used cuntis unbelievable. sometimes i watch womens tennis, especially if it is hot and think about ravaging their sweaty mond with my tongue,,,,rubbing my face in it. the asbsolutely best would be to drink her golden cvhampagne with her oussy glued to my mouth foaming down mty throat into her stomachj. i have never read a womans sex writing that so basically anamslistic. because thats what we are, animals rutting aty each other sex organs and i dont know if we evolved or were created, sex is too dame good to be used exclusively for procreation.

This story isn't sexy at all or even attractive to women. It sounds like it's just written by a guy to be raunchy guy-porno.

it was a great story, although to me it was too short. keep your lovely work coming

Great story, I just wish there was more to it. Dirty and filthy and well written.

Was sent over here from a comment on one of my own stories. I loved your writing - such great descriptions, such a vivid picture speaking to all one's senses, as well as a certain detached quality that mirrors your intoxicated state. Really great.

This is so much better than 98% of the erotic lit on the web. You're either an actual woman, or can write like one.

it was wonderful need a follow up