by Charles Petersunn
Excellent lead up, and coming together of the mother and son
They both need additional practice.
I am exhausted after reading your story, it was brilliant. Please do continue with your erotic writing and thank you.
Definitely a 5 Star Story! Thanks so much for a terrific submission. Please give us many more.
While this is a bit more predictable than some of your other stories, and the last sex scene slightly overlong, I appreciate the attention to detail as always. As in the previous story, the younger man does not seem all that innocent really, and perhaps too willing a partner in this novel situation?
With mother finally giving up her body, mind and spirit to her son was very erotic. Now all her son needs to do is make sure he takes control of her and show her the love of a young man. Fulfill all of her sexual needs and make her his to love and care for. Thanks for the very good story.
Please have more of Dr. Lowenstein with her nephew! I stroked with lotion to their scenes.
The magnificent Dr. Lowenstein coaches again! Somehow, I see promise for more with mother as well as with Joseph's sisters. After all, he needs to assert his manliness with each of the women who kept him submissive for so long, even if they never meant to do so. Keep 'em cumming (and coming).
due to my having read it in pieces over several days. Story line was interesting, the doctor was her usual perceptive and erotic self (practice makes perfect), the characters were somewhat naive (as usual), attention to detail was, as usual, superb, and there are plenty of directions a sequel could take. So, it follows the standard construction from Mr. Petersunn, and I liked it. No spanking, for a change, but humiliation runs throughout. Maybe that's why it didn't excite me - I just have trouble with humiliation - I like eroticism and good old sex - many of Charles' earlier stories had more of that, especially with Prof. Peterson and his own daughters. Maybe I should read this again since earlier commentators seemed to really enjoy it.
superbly written excellent example of hot incestous lust but i missed anal licking and sniffing of his mother and aunts incestous anuses by joe
Awesome story. But very hot and very fun to read. Obviously, I awarded it 5 stars, and I'm looking forward to read more of your works. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. ^__^
I like the voyeurism very much and the slow build up in your story. The description of the spying through the hole in the wall is very well done. A lot of fun to read.
Thanks!
Fresh and interesting approach with nice slow development. I'm looking forward to reading more of the Dr. L series.
Too much descriptive dialogue that wasn’t. needed, 7 pages that of mostly bull shit page filler. Page content matters not. What you do DOES matter. Long paragraph on the last page with eye strain material and small paragraph barely covering a son pounding his mom. 4*