All Comments on 'Drain You'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great writing.

Loved every paragraph. Also it is good to read a story without spelling and grammar errors which are such a pestilence on Lit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

one of my faves so far! I love stories w/ male subs

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Please write another.

I've read quite alot of stories. I really like yours. Please write another :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Fantastic

Delightfully erotic and well written, it really draws you into the fantasy. With a perfect balance of story telling, both implied and active this has to lead into another piece; maybe even a prequel?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
winderful

You hitted My deepest fantasy, I would really Like to try something Like this even if on chat only

machiavelliwriter0machiavelliwriter0about 5 years ago
Almost Trance inducing

Use of the repeatative instructions and dialogue of coaxing was indeed entrapping of the mind. It draws you in. Very effective. Only wish there was a sequal.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Loved it

This was honestly one of the best stories I’ve read on here I haven’t found any mind control stories quite as good as this one, keep up the good work.

nchororanchororaover 2 years ago

Love this one. I come back to it again and again

NalithNalithover 1 year ago

This would be amazing to roleplay. I actually have some chat logs of me doing this with someone. Long and drawn out. I'll probably upload it here eventually.

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