by JukeboxEMCSA
Loved every paragraph. Also it is good to read a story without spelling and grammar errors which are such a pestilence on Lit.
I've read quite alot of stories. I really like yours. Please write another :)
Delightfully erotic and well written, it really draws you into the fantasy. With a perfect balance of story telling, both implied and active this has to lead into another piece; maybe even a prequel?
You hitted My deepest fantasy, I would really Like to try something Like this even if on chat only
Use of the repeatative instructions and dialogue of coaxing was indeed entrapping of the mind. It draws you in. Very effective. Only wish there was a sequal.
This was honestly one of the best stories I’ve read on here I haven’t found any mind control stories quite as good as this one, keep up the good work.
This would be amazing to roleplay. I actually have some chat logs of me doing this with someone. Long and drawn out. I'll probably upload it here eventually.