All Comments on 'Dream Girl'

very beautifully written. i especially liked the twist at the end.

nothing to say but you rock. as usual this story is just nice well trimmed and deliciously wrote. makes one heart melt and wish he/she was the main character

That was beautifully done! I love your descriptions and I truly feel like I'm freezing my ass off though I'm at home in a house with a heater on in Phoenix (which means it's not even cold enough outside to really justify the heater, we're just wimps!). I want to read through a few more contest entries, but then I will definitely be back to check out your other stuff. Nice work.

I enjoyed your descriptions and great dialogue (I'm jealous as I have problems with that myself, hehe). 4 stars!

loved the construct and the sensitive exposition. Thank you!

Hey Lisa! This is a wonderful story and I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I did reading it.

Well, I didn't win <insert sad face here>....BUT, I want to thank my deliciously WONDERFUL readers who took the time to read this little story, and vote on it, and even wrote to me or posted comments here - you guys ROCK!!!

Next time I'm in a contest, though, I'm putting a LOT of sex in my story!!! ;-)

You did a great job - look forward to reading all of your efforts.

loved it

Thought we were getting the ol' "straight girl goes gay" story, nice twist!

You have great stuff. Hope all is well with you.

It was nice and sexy and the ending was great. I didn't expect it. Well done.

Either way is oozing love out of this page ...... Lovely cute story