All Comments on 'Dream Lovers'

Great job! I liked this version a lot better, with the back and forth between the 'characters'. Can't wait for the next one to be posted! It's so hott!!

I loved the story, especially the imagery. I could almost hear the plaintive loon in the distance. Sometimes wonderful things come out of the mist. Thanks for posting, I look forward to more!

Lovely imagery and unusual concept. Great sense of frustrated anticipation, too.

Keep writing. You have what it takes. Since you started the story with going to the lake because of the confusion in your life, I thought you would have explained in the end how you were going to straightened out your life. Perhaps that's where the next story should begin. Please keep writing with only your thoughts on the page.

Wow !!! What a beautiful story ! I simply loved this !