All Comments on 'Dream Sequence Ch. 04'

I love this story I love the relationship between Tian and Mia. I wonder what is up with Tian past and what it got to do with Mia. Update soon please.

Excellent story and lovely characters that would shine even without explicit sex. I love Mia's little side comments. ("Thoughtfulness counts.") Please PROOFREAD for typos and glaring grammar problems, though. The reader can forgive them because of the otherwise quality writing, but they are distracting. If you're not writing romantic novels, you should be.

What an interesting story. I really hope you come back to it.

the title made me think it was about ghosts, so I skipped over it several times. Finally, I stopped and read it and was very pleasantly surprised. It is a very creative piece... please continue with the story!