All Comments on 'Dreams Do Come True'

by bamadude55

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
great story

very good start to the story. I really enjoyed the emotion the two showed each other. I can't wait to read what the two get into in the future chapters. Always great to read a good love story

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Can't wait for Part 2

Great start to the story, keep up the great work.

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 13 years ago
What way to make sure we read the next part.

My God, that ending actually took my breath away.

I can't explain it.

I am so looking forward to the next part.

SorchakSorchakabout 13 years ago
Good editing is useful.

You really need an editor. You kept missing words, and it rather disrupted the flow of your story. That's why you only got 3 stars, instead of 4 or 5. Other than that, it was decent.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Incomplete Stories

You authors keep posting incomplete stories here. Very frustrating to come to a turning point in the story and then with a "To Be Continued" it ends with no resolution to the plot. Very annoying. Please finish your stories before you post them.

longtom2longtom2over 12 years ago

I always love a love story and I really enjoyed this one. That's why I was disappointed that you haven't written the next chapter yet! Can't wait to read about the lesbian aunt being deflowered...sounds like fun ;o))

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Seriously

Only read maybe half first page so far & noticed it jumped from the guys 18th bday to 21st in a matter of paragraphs

Little did I know but my 18th birthday was going to change my life forever....... ........................... Tonight was going to be different. I didn't know why but I had a feeling something special was going to happen. Maybe the moons were aligning together at the right moment, I didn't know why but I was feeling real confident that tonight was going to be my night.

First though, I had to endure the usual family birthday party. Mom was making a big fuss because it was my 21st birthday

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57almost 8 years ago

Um, where was the incest??

No1holywoodNo1holywoodalmost 8 years ago

Another unfinished story. Please finish them

swfb70swfb70almost 7 years ago
wow

nice story but nada since and no part 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Needs a part 2

I recommend Chris dominates his aunt

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great build up to the story. Not many people do it that well. Looking forward to the next part!

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