by sandyb
Very hot story. I like the part where she feels good about identifying her needs. And all the hot sex, too. LOL.
...that such a well-written and erotic story as this has only one comment. This is erotic writing of the highest order and I beg you to write more. Jo Ann's character is so well drawn and her experiences so well expounded. Fabulous stuff.
No tags, no story description or intro, 16 pages, no wonder there are no comments, no one knows what this story is about. I randomly selected a page and lucky found a paragraph that can help describe the story somewhat:
"Well, I've grown to love it. I've just recently realized how much I enjoy it. I hadn't done it until just a couple of months ago and since then, well, I've gone crazy. Broke up my marriage. Been with a bunch of different guys. Now, I'm moving to Florida and I wind up sucking off the young mechanic who fixes my car." Jo Anne laughed as she quickly went through her story. "I've found that I love sex to be kind of rough, you know, or, kind of crude, animalistic. So, I'm on an expedition -- to find my ultimate pleasure. You've helped a lot." They both laughed.
Dreams of the Wild is a blazing drama, full of emotion and love, with strong characters and an excellent plot. It could use a more extensive introduction, and more background explanation especially of the main character. The ending of the story is a bit too abrupt, and the final love scene is much too short. However, these quibbles in no way detract from what is a great story. Five stars.
This is awful writing. And it has no plot, no story. And someone said this is the best on literortica? what a joke.