by mosalan
the thought that donna got her boyfriend to fuck her dad was priceless i laughed my head off.i was a really good story
Ok, so I give you a five, but that is for humor and your writing style, not for the story itself.
I loved this one. A little longer and still dirtier even better. I love the bi submissive and incestuous aspects all rolled into one.
I liked it, but it would have been nice if you didn't end it so fast.
will there be a part 2?
10 for imagination, 10 for your dirty mind, and another 10 just for being different from the dull and boring rest.
Thankyou.
loved your story! Very hot and erotic...would love for this to happen to me..mmmmmm
definitely requires some suspension of disbelief, but so sexy. the first time i've given a 5!
i've never had it up my ass and have often wondered if it would be good.......... sounds like it would be.
I would have enjoyed it more if you had worked a little harder to come up with a credible ass fucking. Like Johnny ought to have known exactly what he was doing - THAT would have been hot.