All Comments on 'Drinking Games Ch. 01'

Well done. I thoroughly enjoyed it, but I didn't give it a perfect rating on the grounds that it left me hanging by the end. The mutual revelation shared by the siblings was all well and good, but I felt certain elements could have been prolonged or extended.

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I'm interested to see what develops now that their feelings and lustfulness are out in the open. Also, little sister's trickery involving the alcohol was quite the fast one she pulled.

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Keep up the good work.

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-JM

Totally hot! cant wait to read the next part!

Great story! Thank you!