by DocWords
Why mention Literotica? Why take a person out of the story like that?
A good approach but seemed really rushed, especially at the end. Lacked any real eroticism
Was a good story until you had to ruin it with a old shaved pussy. Shaved is not very exciting for 42 year old woman. Shaved is for skanks
It fell apart at the end. It was very creative up to that point and then a great disappointment.
2 stars, I thought the plan was to simple and everything had to fall perfectly into place for it to work. You need to work on your character arcs, they lacked depth
Like the story i agree a bit rushed at the end. Would like to see a couple cjapters to follow.
Very erotic and imaginative. I loved the ending and the way she gets her way with her son. A ch 2 would be appreciated.
5*
BJ
Sounds like Mom wasn't the dunderhead he thought she was. Lucky for him she was nice enough to play along.
Lack of common sense at 18 is not necessarily the same at 42
You robbed me of an orgasm with that ending
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