by alparker
I’m glad for your opening comments where you say it will become a different type story as it goes along, or I’d just write this off as just a bad stroke story.
Wow, husbands a total jerk married to a real slut. You said this will evolve into romance. Who of these four people does anyone cheer for, as they are all like yesterdays trash? It’s a fantasy, but none have any real redeeming qualities. Two guys want to fuck a married woman who turns out to be just a tramp, and an asshole that no one cares what happens. I’ll keep reading as I’m interested in how you are going to make these people likable in this fantasy.
Writing is excellent.
Thanks for this first installment. I am looking forward to what comes next.
that was fantastic. that women is so hott. thanks you so much for that installment and looking forward to the others. i am getting hard just waiting
The fun was trying to decide who was cat & who was the mouse ! One thing is for sure. No matter where you work there is always 'a Dustin ' to be found & despised.
----- a few years back!
It was the time the we had to stay in the movie because of a storm.
"Some women can be trusted on their own" (or something like that she said).
And later that evening she's blowing one guy while taking a load in her cunt from another. Yeah, clearly she wasn't talking about herself when referring to "some women". Mind you I can't exactly blame her when her husband is a twat, control freak and shit lover. I guess it's true what they say about keeping a women happy. If you don't then someone else will.