All Comments on 'E & E Ch. 02'

outstanding work. I loved it. Now comes the wait for more and I do hope we get more.

it is is a nice story, but it is just a hair too.

the lt. general is just too macho to men, and too submissive to his wife.

the wife is a lawyer, who happens to be a criminal lawyer, who is too "brilliant", and happens to be be working on a computer program which is just too perfect. (and 3 big 'camera' fish with 3 first times? was there a SEAL with a rebreather kit underwater holding them?)

the aide is too military, with 5 purple hearts while he was being a sniper. (usually one purple heart is disabling to a sniper.)

the aide's wife is preggers, a perfect translator, and CIA field operative who is too important to the agency (which usually doesn't care about anyone) they play with the aide's career to keep her.

and it goes on. even as a fantasy it was a bit too much.

again, it is a nice story, but the "too" weakened its quality, IMHO.

...but not as good as the first. cant realy say why just did not grab me as the first one did. thanks for the story I usealy enjoy your stories more, sorry this time it did not do it for me

Loved the second part and can't wait for part three. I love a good read and this is what I like. Not to much wham bam thatkyamam.

I loved this sotry and the first one too. Can't wait for another installment. There will be another, right? Mack and Ginny just can't go away.

Eagle,

I hope you have some other sequels planned, as I can hardly wait to read some more.

I loved the original, and liked this sequel very much, they have enough of everything needed for a great story.

I found the humour indispensable, we take most things too seriously!

Good work, keep going

John

Yes Eagle i hope you will be writing more chapters to

this series.I love this story.

Pat

Atlanta,Ga.

Grey Eagle your expertise of the terms used in the miltary is superb how long were you in the Goverment services or the Military?

Pat

Atlanta,Ga

Well written with great specific military details and their

relevance to this tighly drafted story! GreyEagles is a master of his craft and I look forward to the rest of the tales!! The story is also VERY HOT...honest and EROTIC!!!

Your story pulled me in and I couldn't stop till i finnished it. Your style is impecable and I just cant praise your work enough, Thank YOU

I simply add, the best talents bring us the best stories. 5+