All Comments on 'Ebb Tide Ch. 02'

Your work it just keeps getting.

Maybe I did that backwards.

I was going out but I stayed in with your latest creation.

Keep it up.

Les

The only thing that bothers me is that I almost missed this story, being uploaded in the group sex category.

up to your normal high standard, hope you are getting better and the teeth are sorted m8

Excellent read once again. You write the good guy sociopath so well it's scary!

FS, my congratulations on the quality of your imagineering of this series. This chapter is a fantastic roller-coaster of dramatics and psychological ferocity.

Thanks for sharing.

Sad that LNH is on hold, but i get that you follow a story till it runs out then move on. I hope you find your inspiration for it again, till you do I'll gladly read what else you decide to publish. I like this story line so far. I like stories that get inside peoples heads. I like character development, and this has it in spades. Keep up on your health, we want you around for a long time to come.

are like the tide rushing in. TK U MLJ LV NV

Fantastic story.. as usual... keep up the good work. I look forward to reading the next installment when it comes out. Your loyal fans understand your writing style and support you.

Gemman

Another fine chapter in another fine series ! Needless to say I really enjoyed this one. Another 5 Stars for your effort .

Thanks again

tx cracker

I am going to try holding off on reading any more chapters until I see one posted with A 'Conclusion' in the tag line.

I have become tired of having stories left unfinished by such a good writer. If a couple of the ones left danggling were to ever be wrapped up, I probably extend that to being a good author.

But there are just to many fascinating characters JS has left in the ditch for me to invest anything in another. I know the reasons but I don't have to enable them.

Here is hoping for the 7th or 8th time to be proven wrong.

I am enjoying the story but I am having a hard time ignoring the blatant medical and tactical oversights. Paramedics in ambulances do not carry or give plasma. 99% of pistols that are carried concealed shoot three shot bursts. On the other hand he does accurately portray the determination, loyalty, and bravery of Navy Corpsmen. Hell he even spells it right, unlike the POTUS.

Why indeed. Vance is such a Mary Sue. This kind of a character would be fine in a 90min dumb action movie, but in such lung and good story? It is quite glaring.

Ummm ... Vance isn't a Mary Sue mainly because I'm glad I'm not him. I am happily a father of two wonderful kids, I have the tendency to forgive because hanging on to hate poisons the soul nor have I ever wanted to be a paramedic, or even a 'macho guy with guns'. I am a fucking fantastic male of the species without the need for a body count. I do not see Vance's propensity for violence as a good thing either. What I do see in Vance is an interesting character who isn't me. I've never written a paramedic, or a SARC, before so I'm exploring that possible mentality. Finally, a Mary Sue is unbeatable ... if you think I've written Vance as unbeatable, or even thinking his unbeatable ... I don't know what to say. He doesn't do everything himself, has friends who help him do things he cannot do and screws up. If he didn't screw up, he wouldn't have gotten himself fired. Now, I would find it interesting to have a friend like Vance as long as I remembered to tread carefully.

Just different enough to have it's own edge...immensely entertaining...definitely interesting...I'm hooked!!!

I am sure that many people have told you this.

You can make money selling these stories as books.

If you need an agent, I can recommend one.

You have one problem: you must finish stories. You don't have to finish everything. But you do have to make an end that would wrap up a book so it can be sold. You must do this first, before contacting an agent.

The reason you should put real effort into the otherwise disagreeable job of finishing stories is that it will make it possible for you to make some money back from all the time you spend on this hobby. That will in turn make it possible for you to defend your use of time to your wife and friends.

Honestly, great job dude.

Nobody asked for or wants your opinions on what they should do with their lives. We are all fortunate that James, AKA FinalStand, generously shares the products of his talent with us. If you truly understood the creative process, we would be reading your writings, and you wouldn't be hiding as Anonymous.

That being said, you are completely clueless to the very real handicaps with which James is struggling, so unless you can be supportive, kindly keep quiet. Thank you, James for managing to gift us with another installment of Ebb Tide.

Would have to be one of the most engaging stories I've read on this site. Loved it, more please.

So much to do, in less and less time, on account of your stories, you cunning conniving bastard.. Stop writing already, ur ruining my schedule !!!