All Comments on 'Ebenezer Scrooge'

Hello, that was a really, very well-made story. Who would not sometimes have the wish that the three spirits also visit him and give him the opportunity to change his past for the better. I liked your story very much. Thank you for sharing!

Nice twist and thanks for keeping Ebenezer away from Tiny time. And to all a good night Ho Ho Ho!

Certainly an odd twist on an old story but entertaining!

Very imaginative and joyful. I’m sure that ol’ Chuck would be pleased.

Thanks for sharing your musings with us.

5* (deserves more)

Tc

One of the best retellings of a classic tale.

Extremely well written thank you for sharing

Brilliant story. One of the best.

It was a surprise but predictable. Well done!

A very good slant on this famous Christmas story. Do you have ideas for others?

Cybotic has put the dick in Dickens.

You are welcome.

(Great story!)

This is very good. Great twist on Dickens’ story. It flowed very well and had the right amount of description. I would love to read more like this.

Good spin on an old classic Christmas tale. Very well done! Hope you can give us another classic, maybe Swiss Family Robinson?

Creative idea. The scene with the two women seemed to take the reader away from the story premise of a Christmas Carol.

Those babies are gonna be deformed as fuck.

Quite the imagination in this story. Quite fun to read.