All Comments on 'Edward and Robin'

by IntrospectiveWanderer

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happyguy36happyguy36almost 8 years ago
more

More please. Great warm sexy story

ender2k2kender2k2kalmost 8 years ago

Yes these characters need another chapter. This was a very good story. Thank you.

RasmatRasmatalmost 8 years ago
Great job!

I liked the story very much. Loved the surprise ending. Ohenry came to mind instantly. This begs at least one more chapter. An easy Five and a Favorite.

Cutty4637Cutty4637about 4 years ago

I would love to see another chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
annoying ending

Okay, first off, need more. Second, the twist was unfair to the reader. R would have told D about Edward, including his business and etc. D would have TOTALLY pegged Edward as her son early on.

Nudecouple60202Nudecouple60202almost 4 years ago
Need continuation please

Loev to read more of this story and how it comes along!!!

Oldsofty1961Oldsofty1961over 2 years ago

just finished it is a good story you would think Edward would know were his mother and sistere live ? and I also agree wit6h a couple other readers coculd use more atleast anther five pages give them the happy ending they all deserve .

Oldsofty1961Oldsofty1961over 2 years ago

gave you solid five

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
wicked

What a wicked sense of humour! Very funny, Of course the ending is immediately followed by the Benny Hill Show theme.

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Erotic coupling with a major twist. Could be an interesting story if the author continued it. 4 stars

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I write for the fun of it. The stories are pure fantasy, nothing more. I also try to write where the characters are realistic and believable. While I do try to eliminate as many errors as possible, I am not an English major nor a professional writer so there are apt to be err...