by IntrospectiveWanderer
Yes these characters need another chapter. This was a very good story. Thank you.
I liked the story very much. Loved the surprise ending. Ohenry came to mind instantly. This begs at least one more chapter. An easy Five and a Favorite.
Okay, first off, need more. Second, the twist was unfair to the reader. R would have told D about Edward, including his business and etc. D would have TOTALLY pegged Edward as her son early on.
Loev to read more of this story and how it comes along!!!
just finished it is a good story you would think Edward would know were his mother and sistere live ? and I also agree wit6h a couple other readers coculd use more atleast anther five pages give them the happy ending they all deserve .
What a wicked sense of humour! Very funny, Of course the ending is immediately followed by the Benny Hill Show theme.
Erotic coupling with a major twist. Could be an interesting story if the author continued it. 4 stars