All Comments on 'Egg Ch. 03'

Thus probably better fits in erotic horror than sci fi

this is twisted

One minute you're saying it's been two weeks, then it's been three days... please edit and resubmit

For fucks sake I can't anymore, the concept is amazing but trying to read this is nearly impossible as you didn't edit anything

Don't know what date issue the other commentator is talking about? They're referring to different things. It seem correct to me? Also, this is already the corrected resubmitted version. If that's the biggest complaint they have then this means it's actually a very good revision as the original version was 10X worse in that it had a lot of immersion breaking typos that could have been caught if the author had used the built-in auto correct in any word processor program.