by 100 Angry Bananas
Very cleverly written & great style. I really enjoyed that one - I don't rarely read any as good as that was! Great job!
Sometimes you take a chance on a story on this website and get really surprised. This was one of those times. Well done.
nice story woudl be nice to see the ferther adventure of the jacket.
well thought out and nice personalty i nthe chars well done.