All Comments on 'Elevator Ch. 01'

Holyfuck! If I may suggest you make one of your tags for the story "humping" or dry humping" That was hot! I've been eagerly but unsuccesfully trying to hunt down stories that have to do with humping and rubbing. This was perfect. 2 strangers...never seeing each other...both just humping one out :fans herself: More please!!

"Inside The Elevator by Olivia Tomson" is the title there and author unless you gave your permission this person has claimed and is profiting off your work. So far I have found several other authors works they are claiming. Here is the Amazon link to it:

https://www.amazon.com/INSIDE-ELEVATOR-Pleasure-Olivia-Tomson-ebook/dp/B078XBF561/ref=sr_1_1?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=1515810090&sr=1-1&refinements=p_27%3AOlivia+Tomson

You waffle on about useless shit too much. I like your works but I honestly couldn't give two shits about her clothes or style of fashion or her dieting choices. Just do a summary of what she's wearing if you must. The rest was good though

I don't see any story written by this complainer, but a whole lot of bitching.

A good one, Michele. I love how you tell the story and have me wishing for him to fuck her pussy and penetrate her completely. Nice twist that she didn't find out who he was. Will he get her aroused again? I hope so!! Wonderful to have an erect dick out in an elevator with a willing pussy eager to be fucked.

I'd love having you like that in an elevator, Michele. I can almost imagine your asshole welcoming my erection in an elevator. We can have more time by shutting off the power ourselves. Oh, to make love to you, honey.

Love, sucks and fucks,

Bob

find_two2@hotmail.com

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Good story!

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Great story! Very well written. I loved the detailed description of her fashion, style and makeup. Looking forward to more.