All Comments on 'Elevator Valentines'

Liked the concept, but a bit too plot-driven, and the prose didn't really flow. Keep trying!.

Sweet and compact, a perfect short story.

Good job!

R.

i love you. i love this story. i love the characters. if i could love something more, i wouldn’t know how. i wish i could give this 10472920474910 stars but i have to settle for a measly 5. i can’t begin to tell you how much this story turned me on, but pulled at my heartstrings at the same time. you are truly gifted. i wish i knew how to get notifications for when an author published, because i’d do that for you. PLEASE don’t EVER stop writing. i love the nerdy, innocent guy. just like how my fiancée used to be when we met. i just can’t get over how wonderful this story is.

Nice one and well written, too.

This was a fantastic narrative and so well thought through and described. Perfect. Thank you. Please add an epilogue.

Great story. Thanks.

The story plot-line, like other tales I have seen from Carrteun, is simply a great emotionally charged tale. One that certainly gets the reader eager to see the main characters experience the magic of wonderful love-making.

There were, though, a few jarring disjoints in the prose. Missing words, wrong words etc. which may have been eliminated with another read before posting. Well aware this might have been sent in for the contest, it would have been smoother if those little problems had been attended to first.

Never the less, I have awarded five stars anyway because the execution of the plot-line was quite superb and had me emotionally invested.

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The characters were engaging and enjoyed the build up

A theme perfect story. An experience, not an examination of an authors quirks. Thanks for a story I will share with someone on Valentine’s Day. I hope to know such bliss someday. I better hurry, I am 76 years into my life.

You have done well here. The love story comes across in a measured, steady way -- the accidental meeting, the dinner, the dating, the lovemaking. Tad and Eileen seem to fit well together. Just wish that when Eileen stripped off Tad's shirt and kissed his pecs that she would have found a bit of chest hair there. Tad is a real gentleman. Please write more!

...and THANKS for NOT throwing in a cheap "cum on Eileen" joke.

Thanks for this totally entertaining and perfectly crafted read.

I appreciate all the feedback. I'd especially like to thank those that provided constructive criticism. I have edited to include missing words, correct a few word choices, and improved a few passages that were a bit labored. The edited version has been resubmitted. It's sometimes difficult to avoid skimming over text passages and miss errors when you've already proof-read several times.

A real tale about people meeting and proceeding through a courtship; not quite in the old fashioned way, but still an adventure. For once I found two characters who I could like and identified with, rather than wish either or both had some redeeming qualities I could like. Hard working people who aren't too full of themselves. What a pleasure to immerse myself into their lives. A 5* effort.

Thanks for a charming story that had romance, humor, and some good sex. I see by an earlier comment that you have picked up on the few edit errors. Good work

Wow, in a genre that has almost entirely lost touch with gentlemanly love this was so delightful. For a woman what matters is how much she reacts to the man, I loved that she was surprised even a bit appalled at how much being touched by him turned her on. His honest kindness was also rare and wonderful. Have you considered writing romance? Good romances have this feel, as well as lots of erotic scenes.

this is probaly the most enjoyable story i have ever read here!

you should write a sequel!

I have read a wholesome story after a long time. Enjoyed it immensely. After all those girls swooning over jerks, this gentlemanly tale was much appreciated. Thanks for your hard work and I will surely check out your other works.

Not even a paragraph felt boring. Great work. Thanks for investing your time on writing and posting it for free.

Thank you for sharing this heartwarming story that was romantic, funny, and sensuous. Great work. God bless.

Lovely story. Extremely well done

So enjoyed this! Thank you!

5 stars from Australia, thanks

Very Nice.

A nice simple romance, well written. Thks

Romantic stories don't get much better than this one. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks.

Unbelievably beautiful.

I didn’t know this grammatically incorrectly named person even knew that the ratings even went up to five. Congrats.

BTW I agree with 5*.

So perfect. I can Rest In Peace now.

I think what I'm liking most about your stories...is...The People.

They're so likable! I enjoy their company!

Romance and love story for an old man, love it!

Just a great little romance story. I would, of course, have liked a little more, but I certainly won’t complain about the author’s ending. Again, very nice. I think it’s a Five Star story in every sense.

Very good story, with sex in his best way, hope the will live together long and happily.

This was both fun and romantic. Thank you. Came to it after reading another of your stories and that one was just like this, if a little wackier, but realistic.

It's a good and nice story. Five star 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

You presented a well-developed and coherent plot. Your characters became real people with feelings and histories which made them real, and likeable. Sex fit into the story instead of driving the plot. Well done!

Good story. A little corny but exactly what I needed. Literotica romances are what’s helping me get through all this covid craziness. Thank you.

Thanks carrteun!

A Romance as it should be done. Worth reading now!

We’ll done. Believable characters. Good plot - maybe a tiny bit contrived but it worked! Bravo.

Awesome story!!!! This one needs an add on (Additional Chapter)!! Well written and laid out!!

Cute story. I enjoyed reading it.

Very cute story.

Outstanding, thanks

Neat and enjoyable

Wow, just wow. Well done!!