by Captain_Ron
Way unrealistic, but who cares? I hope there's a second chapter, and if the guys are going to push Elise to show off, turnabout ought to be fair play!
... and a most entertaining read! More of it, please -- five stars!
one of best stories i saw, i read the story thinking please dont finish please dont finish, can't wait for more.
This was a great start to a wonderfully erotic story! Nothing like an innocent wife/girlfriend preyed upon by friends. Hopefully the next installment will bring more sexual tension and erotic peekaboos!
Always enjoy coming back year after year to reread all the Elise series! Truly a great work!
It certainly seems that she is not the brightest bulb and I'm not too sure about him.
For the geezers out there with book fetishes:
Elise is Amelia Bedelia's slutty granddaughter.