All Comments on 'Elle's Adventure Ch. 01'

You have such a way about your story telling, why is it so? I am already so wanting to skip the small talk and jump to the bedroom, and what is Lizzie doing after work?

Sorry just love the way you set a story up.

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Giggles, thank you Bobbi - there is more to cum, so to say xxxxx

A delightful story. The way you write brings a smile to my face. A trivial detail, but I did notice that Elle describes herself as five foot ten and then says that at five foot eight Beth was taller than her.

...a sudden spurt of growth for our Pixie (or her avatar). As you said, Pixie, a change of viewpoint, and in more ways that one. This promises well and probably along with your myriad of readers, I'm looking forward to more.

There's one error (or typo): at the outset, Elle says: "I had reached my full height of five foot ten..." but a few paragraphs later: "Beth was a little taller than me at five foot eight..." Perhaps Elle is better at French than she is at maths.

A short piece yet so rich, so full, so well paced. This reader was simply carried along on this adventure; smiled outwardly at the teasing, fun, engaging dialogue and reflective moments between two delightful characters. So pleased that this piece was but chapter 1. Thanks for sharing.

Start of another great story I believe.

Loved reading about the meeting between Elle and Fabienne, and look forward to seeing where it will lead. Will the other ladies that are mentioned somehow get involved and join their sapphic encounters??

Great story telling and scene setting, as always

J'adore cette nouvelle histoire. Le début est très promettant.

Imaginons les deux en soixante-neuf bientôt, faire l'amour à la façon française ...

Écris vite!

The dialogue between the two protagonists, if you will, and intervening Elle reflections makes for a captivating beginning (after all only chapter 1). This reader simply follows along with curiosity not unlike Elle’s. You really do have a way with words and characters — bears repeating. Thanks for creating another interesting tale.

Well spotted Anon - I kicked myself after :) Thank you for commenting, and I am glad you liked it x

I am so unused to the view from up here - giggles - so used to everyone being taller than me. Glad you enjoyed it xxxxx

Thank you so much, Migbird - and I hope you will enjoy chapter 2 xxxx

I have to say, I don't normally read your stories. As delightful a start as this is, I may have to reconsider that. Looking forward to the next installment.

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Interesting POV for telling the story. The "Pixie" archetype is embodied in Fabienne, desiring to submit to a younger woman while engaging in some kinky age play. Who exactly "Elle" represents is a mystery, but I'm sure she will enjoy the opportunity "Fabienne" is presenting to her. Elle seemed a bit slow to catch on, but the last line of the story made clear that she is fully up to speed now. It will be interesting to see who directs the action moving forward. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

loving the new story pixie except for the small gaffe about elle's height and perhaps bra size

Thank you so much Migbird, for such appreciative comments - helps to fire my enthusiasm! xxxxx

Thank you Wiz, the second chapter is well underway and will answer some of your questions xxxxxx

Amadeus, chérie, jJe suis contente que tu l'ai aimé. Le prochain chapitre est presque prêt et devrait faire l'objet d'une lecture érotique. Fabienne fera l'objet du prochain chapitre - bisous xxxxx

Thank you, halt, and I hope that the next chapter (just submitted) does not disappoint. My profile page tries to help guide new readers.

Thank you, Anonymous (Jeff, you will never be anonymous to me). Thank you so much for the amazing data, which encourages me a lot - and yes, it will be nice to have the restrictions lifted. But I shall still take care xxxxx

Thank you, Anonymous. I fancied trying my hand at an alternative perspective, and am encouraged by the reaction. The next chapter (just submitted) gives us Fabienne's back story xxxxx

You hit it perfectly darling, as always. That initial feeling that one has something in ones hands, but you don't know exactly what it is, yet you want it and more just like it. I remember it well, the feeling of power of course, but that is just the initial rush. However, beyond that, the shift in ones perspective to the desire, indeed the need, to enjoy someone else through their needs, it yields a pleasure and a bliss that is impossible to explain, and far more intoxicating than any drug. Well done my darling, and I look forward to many more chapters. Five thousand stars.

Delightful

Thank you so much, MamaS - praises from you is praise indeed xxxxx

Thank you so much, Cindy xxxx

Thank you so much, toy. One of the problems writing from the new perspective seems to be old habits dying hard! xxx

I was in bed with my cuckold, and he was about to read me a story by another author when he pointed out that you had a new story available. I made him read it to me, and we were both blown away by it. So much so that I had to allow him to worship me before we went to sleep. He was leaking like a dripping tap, but house rules only allow him to be milked on Saturdays. 10 🌟 (5 from me and 5 from my cuckold.)

Ohh my, i loved it, absolutely can't wait yo read the next chapter. I'm very much likeing the twist Elie thinking Fabienne was much younger. thank you.

Darling Olwen, thank you so much, the next chapter should be up by Saturday xxxxx

Thank you very much, Amanda, there is more to come xxxxx

Yeah there is much more to beautiness then the offered shell ..... Alone a french accent or cute loveliness or a shy person or different lifestyle or intelligence or sparkling eyes or a cute smile and some more ...... Isn't ittricky student & teacher? ....... Lovely start and ten hearts for LP

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Thank you, Franziska, there will be hurdles ahead xxxxx

Quite a start!

Emotionally fun with enjoyable sexual twists and turns.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Thank you, Paul, much appreciated x

My first foray into your world and what a great start it is. Loved the way it built so naturally and gently with Elle almost coming out and then concealing due to the fear of people's reactions. Am interested to see where the interaction with Fabienne goes, 5 stars nailed on for me.

My first foray into your world and what a great start it is. Loved the way it built so naturally and gently with Elle almost coming out and then concealing due to the fear of people's reactions. Am interested to see where the interaction with Fabienne goes, 5 stars nailed on for me.

Thank you so much Julie - I really appreciate that coming from an author of your stature xxxxx

enjoyed the description and setting as you built the story. Your ability to build a scene and tease its meaning is wonderful. Looking forward to ch 2.

Thank you so much, lovinmidlife xxxxx

A wonderful start with depth and openness in the background. Always love your character build. Looking forward to so much more 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Thank you so much Aoife xxxxxx

A Great Start!

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Hallo Pixie!

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A very enjoyable read, and we loved the build-up, thank-you, 5&5, 5-Stars and 5-Orgasms,,, yes!

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Oh I loved this line, [Lizzie was what she called bisexual and what I called greedy; she liked sex and saw no reason to confine it to one gender.] _ I always said a bisexual is undecided, or she's still straddling the fence..... But from now on it's just greedy!!

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As you know Queen Jackie and I really love your stories having to do with the Amazon sisterhood, like "An Amazon Laments" and "The End of Things", (Well, we are not at the end yet - there is more to come, I am just resting this one for a moment - so wait for the women to rise again xxxxx). ... I am so sorry Love... using your own words against you, that is below me! Or maybe it isn't, hmmm? 😇

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From your two dyke friends,

The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼‍!

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Thank you so much, Kat, I really appreciate that. The "End of Things" is next on my list, you will be pleased to know xxxxx

I absolutely loved this story Pixie a definitive 5 stars. I look forward to reading more of this series. Much love to you.

I absolutely loved this story a definitive 5 stars. I look forward to reading more of this series. Much love to you Pixie.

Thank you so much, Maddie - I am so glad you enjoyed it xxxxx