All Comments on 'Elle's Adventure Ch. 10'

Oh boy. What a beautiful person Fabienne is. And Amy, how many brilliant, wonderful people have we 'written off' because of where they come from not for who they are.

5 big ones my sweet.

Not unlike the love between Elle and Fabienne, your stories are so often inspiring and palpable with a wonderful mixture of certainly and uncertainty — to borrow a couple of phrases :)

What is normal? Why do we want to be normal?

It is the deep human need to love and to be loved, to be accepted by the world as we are and to be able to accept the world as it is.

Normal seems to be a convenient shortcut. We like what is familiar. We are attracted to similarities. Even the attracting opposites work that way, because what we are really looking for is complements that complete each other, like day and night, hot and cold, male and female. We wouldn't know how to define one thing if its complement didn't exist.

So we are trying to find our place, to fit in. We recognize patterns, we attempt to make sense of them. If some experiences are repeated too often and others are missing, we move from seeing the world as it is to as it should be. We are no longer learning, we let prejudice and preconceived notions take hold instead.

We become victims of our reinforced world view. In the case of people with docile, submissive personalities, such as Amy and to a lesser degree Penny, the victimhood is obvious. But even people of the ruling class or self-confident people like Pixie's mother or Fabienne's brother are victims. They are trapped in the prison of their limited views. They rob themselves of a meaningful relationship with their daughter, their sister. They miss the opportunity of enriching their lives by knowing a person who can teach them about love.

For the only thing that is truly not normal and even pathological is the absence of love, love of yourself and of others. Another complement: one cannot exist without the other.

...and a glimmer of hope. At the outset it appeared to be sadness for both Penny and Fabienne. Penny seemed to have been brainwashed by an unpleasant husband who took advantage of the love she felt for him. If 'brainwashed' is an appropriate term, then Fabienne was 'brainwashed' by her own body with the school authorities and her own mother reinforcing her adolescent pain. The glimmer of hope is for Amy whom Fabienne may be able to divert from her path of self-doubt. A thought-provoking chapter, Pixie.

Thank you so much, Bobbi xxxxx

Thank you so much, MIgbird xxxxx

Thank you, darling Wolfie - and yes, perhaps those who do not see that they a prisoners are the most imprisoned of all. What will survive of us is love xxxxx

Thank you, darling Maonaigh - and we shall see where our heroines go from here xxxxx

Once again I am left to contemplate the author; something I rarely if ever do. The honesty and authenticity of Fabienne's introspection was profoundly insightful and revealing. It was also something I'm sure many people could identify with and relate to in their own less than perfect lives and selves. I marveled at the pragmatism exhibited by Fabienne as she concluded her frank self assessment with the line "It was, I reflected, what it was." The subsequent narrative which reinforced the theme of suportive sisterhood created a sense of continuity. Elle's recognition and satisfying of Fabienne's needs, when Fabienne herself wouldn't or couldn't consciously fully acknowledge them, may be my new favorite scene of all the amazing scenes Pixiehoff has scripted, The way Elle's servicing of Fabienne was clearly depicted as being born of true love rather than any sense of obligation made it breathtakingly poignant and beautiful. That Fabienne accepted Elle's gift and fully appreciated it was equally so. And true to form, after recieving her pleasure, Fabienne kept the cycle and circle of love and supportive sisterhood in motion by taking a more active part in Amy's development of self confidence, self worth, and self love. That was a nice untied bow to put on the ending of the chapter. As always, I wait in rabid anticipation of what will transpire next. 🍿🍿🍿🍿🍿

The openness of Fabienne is both painful and endearing. She helps us understand her world, her normal, her sexuality, her humanity. My heart goes out to her. I want to hug her and say something … but what to say? Words fail so often, falling so short.

One might first feel the impulse to pity, but that would be a gross injustice. Does Fabienne have challenges? Indeed, some profound, but she is instead an inspiration and worthy of admiration, with pity being the furthest thing from what she deserves. She faces challenges, but she does not complain; she adapts and overcomes them. A true inspiration for those of us who are

We are all mortal, simply clay, enjoying a brief moment in the Sun, then gone.

Fabienne could lament her condition and wallow in the cruelty of nature and her circumstances, but she does not. Instead, she uses her skills and ability to love those around her to teach and make lives better for everyone she encounters. Inspiring and humbling.

I've always thought of switches as neither fish nor fowl, but this story is so intriguing that I'm starting to understand how some people have the ability to be a top one minute and a bottom the next. I love the way you write, sweetie. Please accept another well deserved 5 🌟

\To quote Maonaigh above.. " A thought-provoking chapter" indeed Miss Pixie! I have reread the first half of chapter over and over and keep coming up with different insights into Fabienne as she self reflects ( soft smile ) .

Thank you, as always, Anonymous for your wonderful comments, which I appreciate hugely. Commentators have often, kindly, noted that Pixie/Fabienne does not often seek satisfaction for herself in physical release. This chapter provides the explanation xxxxx

Thank you, MamaS. Yes, self-pity would have been easy, not least as kind people offer shoulders to cry on. But I have always found it best to get on with it in love. Love heals all and makes all worthwhile xxxxx

Thank you, darling Olwen, and I am glad that it helps xxxxx

Thank you, darling Erica - and I am pleased to have provoked your thoughts xxxxx

Pixie, Pixie, Pixie!

I have reread this chapter 3 times and each visit is more rewarding than the prior! The emotional exploration of these relationships is eloquent and poignant.

I am particularly moved by Fabienne’s revelation of her own insecurities and how she has come to accept herself. Indeed, these are wonderful lessons for us all. However, you struck a chord with me as she intellectualized her physical attributes and how she is dissonant with the world around her. Further, you carry us through love, lust, objectification and fetishization, all in the context of her bodily characteristics, which she is naturally unable to change.

These are exceptionally well developed characters: I thank you and I applaud you!

Thank you so much Paul for your kindness and your appreciation xxxxx

I wanted to help be the woman she could be, not the one she was led to believe she was -- Amazing writing - I understand your mentoring me or trying keep writing baby girl

Dear Pixie,

I had to stop reading, for about an hour, after reading “I could see that it puzzled her that I was not taking the chances she offered me to orgasm, and seeing her and Penny, as well as Anne and Amy, reminded me of how different I was” because I felt afraid of reading something terrible, that I did not already know.

I just found it sad to re-read about your female attributes and how older students teased you. But I did not know how cruel your Mom was by not teaching you about being a woman. But somehow with all the gloom that surrounds you, you and your story characters always manage to find a loving relationship. In this story, it is with Elle, and your sexual future looks bright with Amy.

On the other hand, I did learn some more about you through this story. I learned that you were born in France, half Algerian, and have a somewhat of a brother.

Unfortunately, I know I missed the true meaning of this story like all your other stories.

Ultimately, I only care about the amount of “Pixie Magic” that you devote into all your stories and knowing the source of your “Pixie Magic” comes from your Huge and Loving Pixie Heart that beats into your lifestyle, your teaching abilities, the passion you show to your lovers, your friends, your readers, and your devoted followers.

Well Done Pixie 😍😘🥰🤩💖

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Your Literotica Bookkeeper 📚📕📗📘📘

Thank you, Cheryle, darling xxxx

Darling Jeff, son't worry darling - and I love your bookkeeping xx

Just an afterthought — am reading several stories by a new author who shares in a uniquely interesting way some painful experiences, possibly/presumably personal experiences, and as I read those short stories I cannot help but think about how revealing/helpful your autobiographical and lesbian pieces are/could be for the main character of those stories. Just talking out loud.

Thank you, Migbird, I shall have to look out for them xxxxx

Rather sad and thought provoking and a reflection of how we treat people.

I’m sure Fabienne will teach Amy how to love herself and get more confidence x

Oh this is the turning point - and we shall see where it goes soon xxxxx

Drawing me in deeper with every twist and turn. So fascinating 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

thank you Aoife xxxxx

this story has so much insight and characters that make mistakes, the daily type of mistakes that don't matter too much but are always there that it has the same quality as real life - I love it. I also particularly enjoyed the previous chapters thanks to, as an American with many English friends, the long critique of English food.

Thank you so much, Alyssa xx

We Love It,,, Yes ❣️

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Hallo Pixie!

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Another masterpiece of creativity in storytelling, thank you, 5&5, 5-Stars and 5-Wet Pussy Tingling Orgasms!

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You know Love, I think most females reading your stories no matter her age will have what I call an "Oh yeah moment" as she's remembering something similar as in your story.

Even Queen Jackie, just last night I was checking my email and she was watching football or something and just out of nowhere she ask... hey Kat, didn't you spend time in London... is English food really as bland as people say? Why are you?.....WHAT!? - I don't know, J..... it's just food!

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This brings back memories: [There had been the odd pick up in a bar - some odder than others.] _ When I was working the gay-bars, I had my share of odd requests... everything from females with lesbian rape fantasies. ... Too so called "straight" girls wanting to be dominated by me and forced to perform cunnilingus on each other... to me that meant... (Cul de fouet français.) - “French whip ass.” ... That's just another of those cute French phrases.

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From your two kinky dike friends,

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The Black Queen 👩🏿 and Gay kat 👩🏼‍!

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Mmmmm that sounds hot my darling xxxxxx

Fabienne is such a sweetheart. It’s a wonderful viewpoint to see her side of things. I love her perseverance and kindness. Truly wonderful ❤️

Loved, best of the series, very thoughtful.

Thank you so much Elle, glad that you have enjoyed it xxxxx