All Comments on 'Ellie'

Oh HOT! You really make it come alive :)

Great pacing. Very suspenseful as it built to its climax, which was very satisfying, I 'm glad to report.

Both my wife of nearly 52 years and I loved this story. No sensationalizing, just a very romantic becoming comfortable with their own bodies story.

Great story and so well written. I was wondering when reading it, if someone went to the student medical center and turned out to be intersex then which dorm would they placed in and would it cause the usual uproar that everything causes in college.

i really enjoyed this, very well written with a nice pace to it, although I felt going so large on their breasts was a little OTT, everything seems to believable apart from that and i dont think it would have taken anything away from the story if they had been a regular size.

nice work.

..when I recovered, .went right out to the shops to buy new bras and knickers

Wow....loved it

Love the story. Becoming who you truly are would be great. But being older and what you might lose makes it hard. I stopped transitioning. Keep writing

Love the story. It only takes the right person to help break the shell. Releasing you true inner self.

This was such a good story. The erotic scenes were very good, but the build up and actual story were the best part. Very good writing and story premise…a must read!