All Comments on 'Louisiana Days Ch. 02'

some of the best prose I have read on this site - now if you could make the plot a little more lengthy than a wham bam we would be onto something

I like your writing style and the descriptions are delicious, but I was a teensy bit disappointed in how abruptly this one ended.

I have to agree that the ending came abruptly. I wasn't quite ready to let the story end. lol Therefore, you must definitely write another chapter. I enjoy your style.

Nice job

In my book, this is a must-read story for people who are into Erotic Couplings genre.

To JackStrange:

YOUR STORY MADE MY DAY!

I AM VERY GLED I CAME ACROSS IT.

I WILL READ OTHER STORIES TOO.

I just found you and this has been a fantastic telling of your experience.

Bravo!

Thanks for sharing.