All Comments on 'Emily: Snowbunny Ch. 01'

I like your story. You could be the next "stormbringer" author. But please don't make us wait long before you bring up the next part.

Your Fan, Manga

Great Story!!

I hope it continues

keep it going. more stories.

many women may want to try a bigger cock occasionally but most do not want one all the time...as are fucking a white lady...when you find blk men like that all you have is a nigger...many find out many7 niggers really dont know how to please a woman on a steady basis..all they know to do is stick it in and pound...most wont eat pussy and when they say they love it what they mean is they will give it a cpl licks then back to pounding...a woman may like it a while but find its not the end all...and there is toys much bigger than any mans dick blk included...when i read a story like this all it really does is stroke that racist attitude that blks really want...they dont want to let the racist shit disappear all they want to do is grind a white mans nose in that they are fucking white women..A blk man like that all he is in reality is a racist nigger. So why do you think we still have racial issues in this country..With fucking attitudes like this story portrays its no wonder and I'm sorry the white guy was right and no wonder blk women try so damn hard to get white men to want to fuck them the blks from their own race could care less if they have sex or not..Now we have a whole section of our population not getting any loving...i kno0w many blk women that so resent the fact that their men dont want to fuck them and white men would rather fuck asian than blks...maybe if they took better care and lost some of that ass and used a pumice stone on their feet occasionally and didnt talk like the uneducated bitches they are ..Then maybe they could be getting some fine white dick also...a big dick is not all ...Maybe once they find out that all they can talk about is pussy and sports is that why the divorce rate amonst interracial is off the roof...well acdtually imy self dont see the need for any one to marry we should just go back according to this story where we bang them over the head with our ckub and fuck them and whoever we want to as we want to..personally Id love that then we could all beat out chest like tarzan everytime we made a new conquest...maybe the nigger bitches would even get some dick now n then rather than being out there selling it on the streets because thay have no man to fuck them at home ..they are all out chasing that 1 percent of the white women that will fuck them...and personally once they do ..Didja ever notice after that tHts why they continue because then they start smelling like a nigger...why do many blks smell like stale sweat all the fucking time...didja ever shower and use aan antiperspirant...Oh well there is nice blk men occasionally ..So why do we see so many niggers writing this racist bullshit..go figure i guess they really do want a race war one day dont they...have fun my friend I hope you get aids off the white bitches you do fuck..id dsay withy how many niggers they do fuck its just a matter of time till the majority of the race is infected withg everry sexual disease out there ...niggers i think are the carriers of most of our sexually transmitted diseases..why us smart white men stay waway from a niggers leavings

cheaters deserve to be dumped and fucked over and she is nothing but a slut and doesn't deserve to be married or have a good life. She spread her legs willingly and didn't care about the person she married.

That anonymous contributor put the proper title on his half-assed, racist diatribe.

I'm surprised Literotica would accept such a display of ignorance and intolerance.

No wonder he chose to remain anonymous

Don't let the other commentors get you down; I understand this is just a story - it was great and I'm looking forward to part2 !

the tags say EVERYTHING about this 'story' the only tag it missed out was a "FUCKEDUP-RACIST-WRITER-WRITES-BULLSHIT-RACIST-STORY"

who ever you are you are a big racist asshole. in fact the story is lame. boring and dumb. write a real story or stop.

I'll be eagerly waiting chapter 2. Don't let anyone of the other comments get you down, this a great story, and exactly what I like to read; the humiliation of the whole scenario. Keep it up.

I guess that Brad will be swepted away in the upcoming storm that is coming from his unfaithful wife Emily and her new man Damien. Personally after all that has transpired between the two lovers I don't see why she doesn't just dump Brad, get divorced and move in with Damien. Now it's a racial thing with Damien having overheard her husbands phone call to Emily while he (Damien) is putting one in her oven. Emily should just pack it in and live the good life with Damien. I for one thought it was well written and interested to see if the bar scene plays out and if/or a prison friend of Damien follows through with making Brad his bitch. Thanks for writing a nice story and sharing.

This is a first class story, so don't let those people who don't like it get you down, just keep on writing more. Emily's going to be so full of big black cock in times to come, not just her boss's either!

Hot story, had me cumming and wishing I was Emily.

Absolutely wonderful darling! Brings back some memories of my earlier days as a black cock whore. Please continue...

...appears out of the minds of little children trying to play grown-up. I can't wait till society wakes up and makes it illegal for children such as yourself or any other wanna-be adult in their twenties to get married. When you say in your bio you like to wander it makes me wonder if the people paying for your wedding would want their money back.Write when you understand the word erotica,squirt.

The husband is a racist and should be denigrated and abused because he suspects his wife's boss of wanting to do exactly what is happening while he is talking to her? Ridiculous!! Bitch is using any excuse to justify her own misdoings.

I am Black, and I resent the depiction of all Black men lusting after all white women - we only lust after the good looking women of any races, asshole! Called being color blind, when it comes to sex!

Can only hope if they do visit the bar and start some shit the husband has a piece behind the bar and blows them both away - they deserve it.

And, yes, I know it is just a story. A stupid, racist ignorant story that as a waste of time to read. effective, though - pissed me off!

This is an amazing start to what could be another great interracial/cuckolding novella.

Please continue, hoping to read more from you.

Your story was great.I love the cheating wife story and the more slutty the wife is, the more I like it. I found it easy to read and really exciting. The only problem here is we don't know how she found herself on her knees giving him a BJ. It would have been nice to have a flashback at some point to see how everything started. You just throw us into the action. But I gave you 5 stars anyway.

To the dissatisfied readers: Is the story racist? I don't know and I don't care. If the guy was white the question wouldn't be on the table.

I'm sorry but jerks don't have colors. Here there is the stereotype of the dominant black guy who thinks white girls are crazy for BBC. Of course black men are not like that (and women for that matter) but it's just a story. It's like in the american movies where the bad guy is always a russian. It's a useful cliché for a story.

Where is the liberty of speech when someone write a story and 10 people insult him because it's not of their liking? You just could tell the writer "sorry the white woman crazy for BBC is doing nothing for me" and not write 3 pages of why the author is an moron for creating a story like this.

With a decription like "Emily becomes a black cock slut / snowbunny" you should have know it was not a romance story and just walk away.

I hope the author will not be discouraged by the insult of people who hides behind their screen.

Don't listen to all the idiots who think you have to be politically correct, or the story must be reality based. It's FICTION. Write what you want and tell them to screw and leave. Noone's forcing them to be here, and read. I like this and want more of it. I like how she's so immoral, Damien's so dominant and Brad's got no clue, although it should be deliciously humiliating and emasculating when he is told, or finds out, and officially made into a cuckold.

When's part 2 coming?!?

I loved the story!

(Of course, I'm one of those people who kind of "cheats" in choosing which stories to read. I like to read the one-sentence story summaries, and then I only read the full story if I found the summary interesting. So I guess that kind of skews the stories I read towards the kind of things I find interesting.)

Love this story too! Want to see how far Emily will go. Will she be knocked up? Carry the baby to term and raise it? Will that black baby be sucking at her udders as Brad looks on dejectedly, humiliated? Will she have anything other than black babies that Brad will have to raise? Will she become a crazed knocked up black whore for Damien full time?

Looking for a lot more.

Remind those idiots who don't like your stories that no one forces them to read them, so go somewhere else. I'm sure some of us wouldn't like whatever they may write. And, reading or writing stuff like this doesn't make you racist or anything else other than a pervert. So what?

Love it!

Write more, and soon. Forget what the jackasses said below. They should not read it if the topic is not to their liking. They can see in the synopsis that it is about a naughty slut becoming a black cock whore. I love it. I hope you publish the second part ASAP. I can't wait to see where this goes. How bad does she get addicted. Does she pop out his babies? Get used by all of his nasty thug friends? Move on to a bigger black cock from the ones he introduces her too? How far does hubby fall once he finds out? Does he raise half-black babies? Is he forced to clean their mess, or worse? Keep the language as nasty as possible! It adds to the story. Puts you in the room, so to speak.

Just Keep em Cumming. I'll read 10 more if she is as filthy as she is here!!!

Will there be a Chapter 2 or is this story abandoned?

You're a great writer, I truly loved the details and utter nastiness, but I've gotta say this. You hate men or at least husbands apparently. Great writer in the nasty; husband hater.

Loved it, please give us more!

story i've read in a long time.

Your ability to write such great dialogue during the sex scene is what really turned me on. Please continue writing!

Very intense and yet just on the side of believability that makes the best stories.

It's not racist if it's true and everything Brad suspected was true. The sex in this story was hot, but in the end this turned into a loosely disguised "anti-white" bigoted tirade, "justified" by the fact that the husband is a racist...which considering everything written, is a false premise. Observing a behavior pattern and commenting on it doesn't make someone racist. Racism is predicated on the preferential treatment of one race over another or the assumption that a group of people are inferior because of their race. Actually, I'd say that Damien is more racist than Brad, but that's usually the case in these types of stories.

If that motherfucken nigger tried that shit with my wife he would not belive what happens to him and her ,they would the soryest sons of scum bags in the world,they beg four death befour they died. dirty scum bags ,and so are you for writing such shit............................................................

I like erotic stories of black and white but this was just plain silly.

I don't think so. I would bring a rifle and shoot the fuck out of the whole place she worked. Esp. if she goes and gets a black snowbunny on her ankle. That would be the last thing. I would not let her go back once she came in with it there. I would blow her head off, and when Damien came to see about her-Blow him away also.

This story just confirms the fact that a lot of black guys just want to get their dick wet. However, not all black men think this way. Some of them are respectful, but they usually are the whitest blacks you know.

You have to keep the story going. I would love seeing Brad become a Bi-Cuckold and Emily having a couple of Damien's babies. A lot can be done with this story. Turn Brad into Damien's White Bitch Boi and Emily his white slut Snow Bunny. I would also have Damien Pimp her out in time.

To the person who thinks all black men just want their dick wet... Drop the word black stupid unless your telling me you don't like pussy. To the guy down there using words like "nigger" your wife is probably too fucking ugly to fuck I think your safe. People getting all bent out of shape over a fictional story only shows and proves who the real niggers are. You two assholes are the very definition of the word nigger... Ignorant... I'd never say the world would be a better place if we killed all the white people but I definitely say the world would be a better place if we killed all the white people like YOU.

One black lover is fine 'n all, but she needs to get down to some serious gangbanging. A true snowbunny doesn't settle for just one black cock...

Better when one man makes a girl his. Proves he's a real guy.

Gangbanging is just a huge turn off. Can't even satisfy his girl so he turns her into a slut for better equipped friends.

Good story with different and exciting scenarios. Check out a 100% real cheating snow bunny sex video: Ballin White Milf Loves Daddy's Black Dick. It's real....

Love the nasty trash talking between him and her. Also I love the fact that there are women that get off on being treated like shit and the worse it is the hotter they are. Deep down there is a part of me that wants to see my wife like that. It's all a sexual game and it can make me cum quick and hard. Love white women getting broken in by black guys with huge dicks, and I am white.

unless the final chapter of this story ends with this cunt and her scumbag thug's brutal fucking murders, this is officially a worthless story.

something wrong with the white bitch . sure there's black around who would treat her better.

Straight into some hardcore action, very good. She is a masochistic bitch isn't she? I really enjoyed reading this story.

1 star.

But I draw the line at cheating. Brad needs to use a fish knife and cut both their fucking throats.

I love to fuck married White Women and work with them to turn their White Boys into our cuck-suckers and it works all the time. I however dont treat the White Women like crap and I find that aspect of typical IR stories disgusting.

I wish you would write a follow up in which they make the White Hubby their man-servant and bisexual sex-slave and put him through some very heavy training and heavy usage.

Please continue this story. The husband deserves to get his racist/prejudice ass put in its place!

But instead you just demonstrated what the writting of a hypocritical asshole looks like.

"He's one of those thuggy black guys, isn't he? I'm sure he likes white girls."

"Wow," she said legitimately surprised. "That's kind of fucking racist of you."

- Yeah, maybe but he was still a 100% correct, The thuggy black guy is just as much a rascist. In case you hadn't worked it out selectively choosing "White Girls" to seduce is a pretty fucking rascist thing to do. You even fucking called it Snowbunny! So while the pair of gutter trash are getting their freak on they insult, deride and assassinate the husband's character while acting out their rascist fuck fantasy, shaming him for describing exactly what they are doing and exactly the kind of scum they are.

Now in IR that's par for the course, (Its a category specifically for getting off on rascism), that is until that it you start lecturing us through your characters about rascsim.

That's pretty fucking hypocritical if you ask me.

Also, your black character was pretty free with the use of "Nigga" too. You do know that's a derogatory racist term, right? I bet had it been a white character in someone else's story you'd be the firrst one to take issue with it.

A real shame. The sex scene was getting hot but you really overcooked it.

..Your obvious preference for double standars just turned your 4 into a 1.

And as for this dumbass, DHR8486, I suggest you look up the definition for rascism.

Pot and fucking kettle, dude.

Would love for you to finish this story !!!!

I love pretty wives discovering their inner slut... Submitting ... Used... Many Thanks for this tale!

Good write nice. You made a great job of making her a slug. She's not a snownunny they an element of integrity. She has not. Im not a lover of that black master shit. In next chap make sure that worthless black prick gets fucked over by Brad male hom a stronger character it will make the story more interesting. Develop it that way. Can wait for next instalment.

I'd give a ten star ⭐ rating if I could !

Please continue the story, especially focusing on her cheating on Brad without him knowing. Then after a few chapters, Brad becomes a willing participant 😂

My favorite part, she's trying to conceive, just not with her husband !!

Damn !!

Thanks !!!

It is every husbands desire to see his innocent pure and untouched white wife skewered, penetrated and bred by large black cocks despite his wife proclaiming NO, STOP! I've changed my mind!!! I'm not that kind of girl!! Yet white wives are that kind of Bitch and slut. Once a black cock touches the outer recesses of their untouched creamy white pussy and cunt they will never go back to the way it was!! They have become a black man's WHORE!! With the need to continue to Fuck more black men than they had ever imagined. The husband finally has the opportunity of watching it occur as the stiff forbidden iron rod "the black fruit of their desire" begins to push past the white creamy folds of their wife's fuckhole. Despite immediate reservations as to what is taking place their is no hesitation on a husbands part as they look even closer as the dark black shaft begins to push against their wives cunt as she grimaces and knows things will never be the same again!! She is merely a black mans CUM DUMP and whore. It is what they both want but are they prepared for the black lover's friends that she will be passed onto whose desires are merely to Fuck, breed and impregnate her with their black baby batter??!!

Super hot! Waiting for more

Theres something amazing when I was with a Man like Damien and knew I had to Give IT ALL Up to him and that He was just going to Take IT and KEEP TAKING me no matter what. I've had some of my BIGGEST Orgasms with Mens like Damien who were taking me and telling me I belonged to them now. Specialy when they would just CUM IN me and not even Ask or Care if I was on the Pill or not just like Emily. Truth is I wanted THEM to CUM IN me most of the times. How I got my beautiful kids from Mens like Damien.

Dumbest shit I've ever read! All the years in the military and the only big black cock I ever saw was in a porn video!

that niggas way too racist husband did nothing wrong she a retarded slut

This is just how my wife become a BBC slut. Awesome story!

Five stars Great Story

to RanDog025 your comment means you have absolutely no idea. i'm a bisexual crossdresser and i'm telling you now. black cock is the best.

Love this story.

Once they tired of her and she ends up as a Broken Down Crack Whore She will BEG him to take her back...

Couldn't stop reading. I hope you finish her journey. I need to know how you want it to go. Please finish her journey. Great story