All Comments on 'Emma: Passionate Bride'

Love the setting, the set up, and the action. Dialogue believeable, too, even to the point of admitting her desires and actions are a bit atypical for the mores of the era.

Excellent all around.

Very hot. Looking forward to more of Emma's adventures and I plan to read more of your stories.

...great start...hope you continue this story line for awhile....

I loved every minute of it and I cant wait for the next part

This was one of the most poorly written stories I've read on this board. The grammar and punctuation was terrible and the characters didn't ring true to their setting at all. You really need to find a beta to critique your stories before they're posted, I think you'd find it a big help.

Quick Draw McGraw? Didn't know the Comanche could get ABC Television circa 1966 in 1890s West Texas. Tell me, did they have to use rabbit ears or did they have satellite dishes??

Interesting setting and good scenes but a bit more physical and verbal content. looking forward to chapter 2