All Comments on 'Emma's Pool Party Ch. 08'

i check your stuff every week!

My favorite Mother/Daughter team yet....nice work

Everything about your writing is epic, hold-no-bars, beautifully written fantasy.

Just kidding! This was an amazing and filthy tale of mother-daughter depravity. You would think 6 pages is enough, but that teaser at the end had me wanting to read on for 6 more! I can't praise this chapter enough. For a series that started out so gleefully over-the-top, it's impressive how you've managed to keep it climbing.

I hope your next chapter is what happens with the three of them over the weekend ;)

This series featured seven sizzling hot chapters about a guy in a "harem" situation, where he would have four beautiful women and their daughters to his disposal. I guess you felt like changing the rules of the game and suddenly bring in strangers to fuck alongside our hero. Seems he needs help with so many needy females after all. I for one was disappointed about this development.

Sure, Authors crave variety too. There's nothing wrong with exploring other fantasies. But this foursome would have been better placed in another story of another genre. You just nuked one of the best "harem" stories on the site.

A masterpiece.

That. Was. Awesome! Five stars. Thank you!

Please tell me you haven't given up on this series? We need more! :D

Hope you pick this and Office back up soon! Both are great series.

This is just getting for some mother daughter action! Hope we get it in upcoming chapters!

I hope you finish the story and don't leave us hanging?????

One of the best story lines on the site. A sequel would be great and perhaps could talk about the girls reuniting after returning for summer break from their college studies, what the mothers did after such thrilling experiences, and perhaps adding some fresh characters to the mix, such as another Asian mother/daughter (Japanese, Chinese, etc.).

The addition of tyler ruined this story for me. I hope there isnt a repeat since it goes completely against the tone in both series youve written. Adding one or more men to either series just for something different just detracts from everything.

One of the greatest stories on this site. No matter how many times my SO or I have read it over the years it retains its power.

I know it's been several years since your last upload but we hope you're in good health and have stayed safe through Covid. We miss your writing.

Incredible! Loved it! 5 stars aren’t enough. Good detail. So erotic. Can’t wait to read the whole series. Though it is going to be tough to beat this first chapter that I have read. Excellent. Thank you!