All Comments on 'Emma's Pool Party Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Yes !

Great work ! Keep the stories coming. ATM was great.

bryand450bryand450over 12 years ago
The O-Face!

Simply Fantastic!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
what happened to

the one that put her bikini back on & went to the far end of the pool?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
redhead

what happened to the girl in the white bikinni????

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
That's what I like

Really like the overall story. I really like the ATM, snowballing, and Mfff. My only advice is to slow it down. It's so good I want to savor it longer. Looking forward to you next '5' installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
More

Really enjoyed this! Would love for you to write another one about Holly! She seems like a lot of fun ;D

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
i'd love a follow up!

curious to see if amy's willing to open up or not... ;)

hourshoursabout 12 years ago
ass to mouth

The ATM is great. Please write a incest story about ATM addicted girls.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wouldn't Do It

ATM? Too unsanitary.

I will only rim a recently washed ass.

Ass to pussy fuck? You ever had a chronic vaginal infection? Me neither, and I never will.

Hope the virgin waits for someone she loves.

Best life long memory.

Lust_of_dragonLust_of_dragonover 10 years ago
a crazy party

Reading this whole series and its sister story is like watching a hollywood budget, well written porno. Which I wish would happen irl. But reading it is also great. That guy slays women like a knight slays dragons...

MegamuffinMegamuffinalmost 8 years ago
Fucking love this story

Came back to see if this was as good as I remembered. Yes. It was fantastic. I love the big tits, the big cock that never quits, the outdoor fucking, all of it.

JacksonPhallicJacksonPhallicalmost 6 years ago
who's Aysha?

Seems like her name goes back and forth with "Holly"? Are they the same girl?

DADDYLOVER2DADDYLOVER2almost 5 years ago

I WISH I WAS THERE TO JOIN IN THE FUN

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

This, like, dialogue is, like, giving me a headache.

SoCaNoCaSoCaNoCaabout 1 month ago

What ever happened to Amy?

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