by LaPatitMort
Very Good, Thanks....hope to see a follow up chapter. Love the way you handle the firearms training....never had that in the army, of course none of my trainee's looked like her.
This one I haven't read here! Writing was good and had me wondering where everything was going to lead.
Well you managed to put two of my favorite things together in a story
Having sex and guns. But the place and the way they had sex took some imagination!
Good job!
Thanks for writing!
Certainly a different type story than usually posted here--these people seemed real and caring. Would like to see/read more about them.
Thank goodness your back, some old school English teachers did a good job... keep em coming.
she is nasty - Carrie is more appealing. Love your work, as usual good enough to be on here.
I really liked the title of this story and i like what he did for Helen, it was really something to see that a guy connected with a woman without her giving directions as to what she feels or thinks.
I think i would have liked to see more action between them, in the house, his office, bedroom maybe? But all in all i enjoyed it .. stayed blessed :D
Powerful, tender, sensitive, hot. This is one of my all-time favorites. Thank you so much.