All Comments on 'Enchanted Twelve: Ariel Ch. 01'

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RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 16 years ago
Sweet and ....

cute. *grins* Another nice chapter to your group of stories. I like the purity you're displaying for Ariel. A very sweet addition to the chain.

starrkersstarrkersover 16 years ago
Lovely

Nice to see at least one of our princesses is a "good" girl :)

glynndahglynndahover 16 years ago
Oh, I really liked this one...

A lovely fairy tale princess and her prince.

TE999TE999over 16 years ago
Nicely Done Magica.

Ariel seems to be the chaste princess--but methinks Geoffrey will change that before too much longer. A great addition to the chain.

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