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All Comments on 'Enchanted Twelve: Ariel Ch. 02'

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TarakinTarakinabout 16 years ago
Very nice story!

A very nice story. I loved the scene where she surprised and helped him. Very insightful written. Can't wait for the third part!

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyabout 16 years ago
Sweet tale...

I am truly enjoying the "sweetness" of your characters. I sit here and imagine a lovely setting with a couple of innocent characters that are simply enjoying the moment and falling in love. Another excellent story and a great addition to your prolific writing. ~ Red

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I'm a passionate, married, BBW looking for an outlet for my writing. I've written quite a few stories of varying degrees of quality over all the categories. I hope you find something you like.