All Comments on 'Endangered Ch. 04'

etaski, what a great editor to get! i was looking for this update but im too tired to read it all right now. much longer than the prev chap. im sure it's a 5, i'll wait to vote till after reading to be fair. ok, just one moar page ;D

NEW CHAPTAH BITCHEZ!

G: Super excited to see an update to one of my favourite stories. And what an editor! Wow. Please don't make us wait so long for the next installment

1. Still not huge on the incest stuff. Not that I'm gonna stop reading, mind you -- I just skip it. To each their own, and, as another one of my favorite authors (TaLtos6) says, 'sometimes the characters just write themselves, and the author can't do anything about it'

2. Damn. Etaski's your editor. "Dude, that's epic."

3. Cliff hanger.

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awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome awesome.please update next ch. as fast as u can.and that so bloody clifhanger too good.

Ok you have my interest! The last was a really nice long chapter too...but I'm really hoping if you know we're waiting you'll get more interested in making regular updates to this story

Months with nothing is depressing

Another great chapter! Love that this is back. Good luck on the new job and we see another chapter soon

Another great chapter. Probably my favourite fantasy story on the site right now and one of my favourites period. A great balance between a fantastic story and the sexy.

Understand that it sometimes takes awhile between installments so please keep up the small status updates on your biography. It really does help knowing the author hasn't just vanished. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Five stars. I am glad you have a new editor. He is already doing a fantastic job.

As soon as I read about the guards bursting out in the airport I was like "YES! Chris, shove an ether grenade in one of their chests and deliver the beat down!"

Seriously, excellent work and keep it coming... Faster!

A cliff hanger with an untold wait for relief, have you no soul?

This chapter has definitely been worth the wait though imagining months passing before another dose can be administrated, I think something inside me has died.

Dramatics aside please keep writing I sincerely love your work.

Thank you for another great chapter! *****FIVE*****STARS*****

Loved the chapter, just didn't understand at the end where you said you didn't know when the next one is coming, Haven't you already mentioned on your bio that the 5th is already completed?

I am sorry if I come across a bit obsessive it is just there is little to read that is as good as your story.

I would just also like to say to take whatever time you need (but not too long :) ) but keep us updated!

I thought the next chapter was ready please post it soon, loving the story

Bitch ass cliffhanger not nice

Two of the best authors on the site pairing up... Just wow. And you delivered.

Can't wait for the next (but take the time you need to make it the awesomest!)

Now I'll go back to my Stephen King book you interrupted me in the middle of.

MORE

MORE... I need more, need my fix....... going into withdraws....

While I may not be into pseudo-incest, I am most certainly enthralled by the world you are creating...and the crispness of your writing.

You are one of the best on this website.

Awaiting more,

Noble Truth

Been looking forward to this thx it was really good

awesome chapter. now I have to figure out what to do til the next chapter. after reading this chapter I don't think I can go back to reading just any story. you have set my standards to high my friend

interesting story. another cliffhanger! very enjoyable so far.

good luck on your new job. i guess it'll be awhile till the next chapter. i would make a couple of suggestions to those waiting for your next post.

http://www.aspartanswarchronicles.com/

http://www.weavespinner.net/worlds_of_fel.htm

both excellent.

Fuck you LTPC. Fuck you.

I hate cliffhangers.

You better get that ch 5 really fast or else i be mad :D

Great chapter non the less, i enjoyed the length and im looking forward for the next one. I saw a few grammar mistakes but considering its 11 literotica pages thats quite alright.

Anyways, keep up with the good work, you will do great with someone as experienced as Etaski ;)

I would like to thank Etaski as well for an awesomely fast editing, keep up the good work as well, we all love ya ;)

I believe the correct term is 'cruel and unusual punishment.' Honestly it's really good, I agree with Susan and Annabel; it's not incest, they're not related. Beside that, I really hope that the next chapter comes out a bit sooner, I think maybe a bit shorter, around 6 pages perhaps, but hopefully with shorter intervals between postings would be nice. Anyways, good work. Keep it up.

~LiterKnight

LTPC an fantastic read with vivid imagery and world is expanding and introducing new characters our and an unseen enemy surfaces . the dragons , vampires and dragon gold and leaving us a dangerous cliffhangers at best. Shout out to Etaski for editing this chapter for us readers .

Nice work - and you couldn't have got a better editor. You're up on my watch list with (I'd guess) her.

This was great sad I won't get the read the next ch as I will have past away the doc gave me a month to live kind of suck some many thing I have not done but I got to read this ch so I am happy

Ltpc plus Etaski. Makes for a wonderful combination! Can't wait for the next one!

Etaski is your editor and I saw Noble on your comment board. Everything I love in one place. (Fans self)

PS The itch venom sounds hot.

Now to think that I have to wait 7 months for Chp 5 is a Huge turn off

WOW! You have out done yourself on this one!! Congrats and a job very, VERY well done!! Only bad thing is you've been now taking lessons on how to leave a very evil cliff hanger on us! BAD!!! ;-) LOL! I wish I had something to add to make this great story better, but I have zilcho.... Anyways, great work and when could we expect an update? I come by here almost weekly to see if any new chapter are posted.

AWESOME!

absolutely loved it. Looking forward to many more chapters.the cliffhanger ending are aggravating but that's what makes I truly good story.so I'm at an impassetrying to figure out which vampire would be better for himbut I guess I'll have to wait for the next one to see how it goes.

Very well done. Hate cliffhangers. They leave me depressed but oh well.

Very nice rivals path of the necomancer by intrepid. I don't care if it takes you a month or 3 to get the next chapter out I just ask that you finish the story

Great to see another instalment, I am loving this story. Your character and plot are well developed and you find a great ballance between erotica and genuine story telling . You are fast becoming my second favorite author. My favorite is now your editor. Not sure how I feel about this, your story will definitely benefit from etaski's input but does this mean that we will have to wait longer for the next red sister chapter? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.

No worries, you will not have to wait longer for any Red Sister chapters. LT is more than capable of applying new tools and suggestions without my holding his hand. I still have the time needed to write my own story and enjoy being able to help out. Glad everyone is having fun!

Cheers to LT and all good readers.

Thank you for posting another story I was starting to get worried you were one of those people who writes an amazing story, and then just stops before finishing.

Can anyone get him to finish path of the necromancer?

I love this story, but I don't appreciate the cliffhangers.

Really looking forward to the next chapter. I'm in it for the story more than the erotica (not that I object). Thanks!

Ur story is superb

Plz keep writing

looking forward to the next update

I agree with anon please can we get him to continue path of the necromancer

to start, ill be a bit contradictory... yes, as an author, so far, I think he would be a great candidate to continue IF's unfinished work... I am as enraptured here in Endangered as I am with the 2 IF story's, that's saying something!

however..... fucking a people, hes in the middle of his own, and its damn good, do the man/woman a favor and let him finish his own worlds... this is Kanye West Crashing the VMA Stage During Taylor Swift’s Award all over again...

also, CH5 PLZ NAO!, as said, I am as eager to read more of your written world as I am for IF's works, as well as CPLockman's Voyage... I lose bookmarks all the time but your author page is on my SYNC account, well done!

LET IT FUCKING GO.

The guy is writing his own story, and if you think it is flattering to say that he should drop his own plans to take up a gone-twit's material not only without his permission but just to please you....you have NO IDEA how tactless, rude, witless, obsessed, selfish, and insane you actually appear.

The guy is right to not even acknowledge such a stupid suggestion. Enjoy the story presented or got dig your fingers into your anus and smell it like any retarded child.

Hey ltpc,

could you give some more status updates on a regular basis? Even if the story still needs more time a lot of readers would be comforted by some sort of update.

Hey I didn't mean to be rude I just liked the story and wanted to see it continued and I felt Ltpc is a great writer and could be one to do it if he got round to it, I didn't mean to offend.

Ltpc please continue to write a brilliant story loving everything from the characters to the world and needing more after that cliff hanger, continue with the great work

I really like the premise, especially as you say that we have not gotten to the meat of it. Thank you for sharing your intriguing story. Please don't let the jerks dissuade you from continuing to post on your own schedule. You have a talent for writing!!

Very good story, I'm looking forward to the next installment, thank you ltcp

Update please :)

"The chapter its self is written, but after working on Ch. 4 with my new editor, it's clear that I have a lot to work on to get it up to scratch. I also have a lot less time for writing these days because I work long hours." just saw your blog edit from a month ago and died a little inside...

addicted... very! have the link for Ch5 bookmarked for daily checking so when it DOES go live, ILL BE READING YEAAHHHH

First I just wanted to say I'm loving your story so far. I was just wondering if you could perhaps give periodic status updates as to how the story is going. I know you're probably busy and working on the story whenever you can, but I think it would be reassuring to your readers if you popped in to comment every once in a while or update your profile. I've started so many great stories on this site that ended up never being completed and I'm really hoping this won't be another.

more chapters

Its really one of the best stories in LT... I hope you will have more time to continue this great story and not end up unfinish like most great stories in LT... Thank you for the effort and giving us readers a hell of a good story...

More than 2 months since ur last update about ch5. When's next chapter release ? Still not done ?

I'm still alive, still out there, still working an the next chapter. Thanks for the encouragement, it is appreciated.

LT. Good development of the characters. What I like the most is exploration of the abuse of natural resources and the greedy/exploitative aspects of people towards it. It is like a metaphor for man's abuse of the environment for their own short-term needs. As you continue to unfold the various aspects of "dragon as natural resource", I find myself quite pleased. Also, I think situation is as important as description for sexual scenes, so in many ways this was a hotter chapter (ignoring the incest controversy) here as your scene explored a little dominance and submission, aggressiveness, uncertainty.

My biggest problem with your main is he is too powerful, by which I mean, it seems like he could just phase into the ether, teleport, and be done with it. I know he's in human form..but that's what he did in chapter1. So I look forward to seeing how that'll be addressed (e.g. mental block?).

Finally, my other advice would be to produce more shorter pieces more often than longer ones. At 38k words, it can be hard to keep putting all that out, but whatever works for you.

I have been pleasantly surprised how your writing has progressed so far, especially your style and description. There are moments of brilliance in the descriptions of things that blow my mind. No doubt when you've fully mastered that (practice makes perfect) you will be legion.

Best of luck

LTPC, this is just me encouraging you to post chapter 5. Great story and I'm REALLY looking forward to it.

Omg, how did I not notice this before?!

I just read all four Endangered chapters today (yeah, I have way too much free time >->), and these are so addicting and well-written. Please finish the next one soon! I wanna know what happens to Chris!

2 months since last story. Very few updates regarding next chapter by ltpc. Just out of curiosity I would like to ask ltpc, how many chapters do u plan to release per year ? Is there a set number and because of that there are no new chapters or because you are busy ?

Possible spoiler alert.

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I suggested the living tattoo evolving and growing over time from Chris' magical injections but as I re-read the stories (while anxiously waiting for chapter 5), I saw where LTPC hinted at that. Heh, I'd like to think great minds think alike but more than likely, I subconsciously remembered that bit.

Etaski just stated that she finished the editing and LT just needs to give his final approvement. So maybe we will see Ch.5 within a few days.

Just wanted to rewrite for those not following the Red Sistser arc.

~Methusalem

It's taken a while but the next one should be on the way to you all in a few days.

Cheers,

LTPC

Have enjoyed all the chapters up to date! Keep'em coming! :)

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"Damn, damn, damn, damn, DAMN!" I tried so hard to read this chapter s-l-o-w-l-y because I knew I would read the next one as soon as I freakin' finished this one and then who knows how long I'll have to wait. I can relate so well to Lillian; I can smell the writing in your blood, it's intoxicating (you smell so fucking good!), all I want is the merest drop...you won't feel a thing...just relax...that's right...

It is truly WONDERFUL that you and Etaski are working together; I love your work and her's individually, together you two ROCK. I am as wound up as a 5-year old heading to the zoo! Running around in a circle pissing like a puppy! Well...you get the idea. Pretty excited.

Despite wanting to throw a tantrum that I can't have a completed series just because I think I should have it, apparently I'll have to settle for the Garrison Keillor sign off: Be well, do good work, and keep in touch. We are all eagerly awaiting your efforts!

...the sex slows things down to give us a break from the action of the story! Nice job....I'll be starting on the next chapter soon, can't wait!

I love the story

I would love it more if Annabell could hav sth tht Chris dies, just for her, tht he wont do with the rest of the brood to respect her as The First and also his true love.

In the fantasy world of Magic, more, not less is at the hands of the characters.

If there was an armored car available up north, why wasn't one provided as they left London? If spells and potions are at the ready, why wasn't a masking barrier around them while in transit? Where is the Synod in all this? If the continental US is divided into 4 regions with heads over each, why are they not involved in the transit of an endangered class 01 Being? What in the heck is wrong with Reyla for letting him go virtually unprotected? seems a bit incongruous. to me.

and I still love it but just wish the author would have kept writing

Last chapter to gather info, then i'll be planning something for it along with the other works

JC

I loved this 4th chapter feels like you are just getting it started good I hope you continue on this series as I see a nice long future for this story.

..."It would contain a measure of chilled vodka, a half of Sambuca, a half of Grand Marnier, and of course, a few drops of your own delectable blood. I call it the Buffy, for it will surely slay vampires by the dozen!"

Ha! Good stuff, surely.

A bit on the addictive side, but I'll survive.

With Chapter 5! :)

I cheered out loud at points, which is a little unusual for me, to say the least. A few minor editing problems, but nothing serious, which makes it all the more pleasurable to read a great new arc in the storyline.

PS I'm so pleased you didn't try to put English and Scottish accents into words, and kept it classy instead. More kudos.

Actually, the bar owner really reminded me of Zuse from TRON: Legacy.

You wrote "UV shielded window" in the scene where Lillian is driving to Scotland from London. I don't know if it was in reference to Lillian being visible during the day, or not, but glass, with no additives or tinting is a natural UV blocker.

That's why you only get a suntan/burn when the window is rolled down in a vehicle. If it is kept rolled up, you might get hot, but there will be no skin reaction to the sun.

It's also why it is better to have glass lenses in either eye glasses or sun glasses; you get inherent UV protection for your eyes.

Hope this helps sometime, somewhere...

GeoD

I love reading and this story is one of the best I have ever read

what a way to end a great chapter, love the length and love the content... what a story.... I so want to tease you about how you ended it but I wont.... thats what great writers do, draw their readers in and keep them wanting more... way to go....

"..Lillian was feeling hungry as well, especially watching the others eat. The dragons didn't have any blood on hand.." Referenced again at breakfast and yet again on way to London ("I'm really hungry"). Did the dragons not know their guests would include a vampire bodyguard?? Or were they really, really, really bad hosts??

When it popped up the third time I began to suspect it was a plot point. Time will tell

Aring the last para this ch was a waste of space

The Anon poster is wrong on the glass:

UV light is generally categorized into two frequency bands, UVA and UVB. (UVA is closer to visible light.) While it's true that glass blocks nearly all UVB (the range that gives a sun tan), it does not block all UVA.

So keep the UV filters on the glass!! Anyone with a big book or art collection, or who has a Vampire friend, should know this. In the case of books or art, having direct sunlight through a window nearby will 100% cause colors to be destroyed over time, and UVA is the culprit. Some light fittings also produce mild amounts that can be troublesome in the long term.

Hope this helps. And love this story, can't wait to read more!

The dick knows how to phase on command. I believe it’s “Just imagine where you want to be”. Straight from HIS dragons mouth. So in the van he’s worried about what’s outside... WTF? You need to keep a handle on his powers and the rules of your world that your writing in.

All he has to do is slip into the ether and walk away while he is in the back of the van. Then who cares about anything, the 4 in the van with only 2 in the back, or what’s outside. Also the trip to the ether would recharge him as well.

So I say again WTF. You’ve written the most powerful young dragon, who can do crazy hard magic, easily phases on will, can construct explosive devices using ether matter, has a bullet proof body just not wings, and is Hellhiem strong in human form and stronger again in the next forms.

You have made it so as any confrontation can only be won by the purple dragon. So writing this last bit is shit. Well except for cornering him surrounded by humans with the keep the secret clause to limit responses. He can be out manoeuvred but not out fought. So as soon as he is taken back out of the airport or wherever the answer is phase straight away and go from there. Run or fight.

I personally think you handled the abduction the only sensible way it could have unfolded.with a little knowledge of violent actions,at times you need to keep a low profile,as this is a story I want to say great job.to the other commenter get a life or read something else,like maybe Harry Potter

I'm just re-reading this. It's amazing. I want more.

This has to be one of the best multi-chapter story arcs I've read on this site!

I just finished binging the series and am eager to see more! Glad to see that you are on Patreon and have signed on as a supporter to keep abreast of the progress toward your next chapter! Keep up the great storytelling!

While I’m new to Lit, I’m not new to reading & usually manage to start/finish a new book about every other day. My fav is romantasy & shifter/paranormal erotica. Having read thousands of books, I know talent when I see (read) it and you, my friend, are a phenomenal writer!!! I have zero doubt in my mind that if you continue publishing stories as amazing as “Endangered”, you’ll find yourself on the NYT Best Seller’s list sitting at #1. EASILY. I cannot wait to see where this story takes me and hope to discover more of your stellar work. Happy writing, love!!

No real words for my extreme admiration of your imagination then transferred to writing.

Marks out of 5 you get 10+

Thanks

Getting little tired of dumb wuss dragon. And the whole mom bit is not sexy. Maybe if she was really mom but it’s just weird. The facets of your story are great but the boy is so predictable. I knew after the first attack they would attack with people around and he would give up not to cause a scene.

this story would've been good if Chris wasn't such a pussy

Hopeless coward. Hopefully his "mother" will die soon so he can learn the cost of being a gutless pussy

If you're going to cause trouble an airport must be about the most stupid place in the world in which do it. Absolutely stuffed full of people with guns, hopefully well trained in how to use them. A great way to bring this story to an abrupt end.

Great Series!!!

Love this series more every time I read it! As for the previous comments by rude anonys, gee, do you feel this entitled everywhere you go? At least have the courage to sign your name so we can go read all the stories you’ve posted here. Oh, you haven’t written anything, have you? Try showing a little appreciation and gratitude for all the efforts the author has invested in providing you with pleasure. It’s not as if they’re getting paid; so their only rewards are comments left by readers. Didn’t your momma ever teach you to keep quiet if you can’t think of anything nice to say? Thank you for sharing your talents with us. 🙏 🥰 ❤️

What's your interpretation of hardcore incest?😂

Not everything in this chapter is my cup of tea, but overall still enjoyed. Thanks for the heads up though.