All Comments on 'Endings Ch. 02'

That dick! Poor Max, thats just cruel. Even if they had set the terms at the beginning it still stings! Can't wait for more! Always was addicted to your stories. Great great stuff.

What the hell?! This cant be! There I was thinking the nincompoop has fallen and pulls a stunt like that. I'm really not a fan of Cam at the moment. There better bloody hell be a twist! That being said - I really loved this chapter. Lol! Thanks for sharing... Cat

Methinks Cam has a serious wake up call coming. ;)

I cant wait to see what happens!!! Poor Max!!

But it still is a shock. You have to feel for Max. Only surprise was it went on that long.

Poor Max. I don't like Cam right now. Can't wait for more.

Love this story. Cant wait for more. Hope we get Cam's POV.

I love this story and agree with the last comment I think Cam's POV would be great!

after the first chapter that Max would develop a little more self esteem. But I guess sometimes, you really have to heard yourself before you learn.

I actually teared up a bit at the end, there. Great writing. The emotion really comes through.

I am in live with this story, its very well-written and the plot of the story itself is well-grounded. You are a very good writer.

Omg this was fantastic.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

How sad for Max

im feeling for max, even though he knew where his heart was leading

DAMN, DAMN, DAMNNNNNNN

That sucks! What a dick.😒🤨 still your writing is good though.

Can’t blame Cam here. Max knew what he was getting into