All Comments on 'Enki's Puzzle Pt. 03'

Good story but too short a page a month is too little.

Ancient deities were notoriously fickle and cruel. Short on the help, long on the vengeance. So far, so good.

Thanks for another fine chapter. Take care,

James aka FinalStand

Love the mischievous way the god is teaing with him. I think the puzzle will not end, until he has both his mum and sister pregnant. Keen to read more.

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fun original story. can't wait for the next chapter. i'm sorry that i have no $ to tip jar your webpage.

Too short publish more

Really original and great idea. And what a buildup!

Fantasy - check, slow build up- check, Time loop -check. RR scores again! any Others Reader remembers a simiar time loop Same day Story with a dad ? thanks

His dad is an asshole. He's also a jerk too. He still doesn't recognize that he needs to be sweet and loving to his mom and sis. I really hope Enki shows up and explains things to him. I mean, Babylonian culture may have once been a matriarchy. Women were honored and perhaps/hopefully worshipped (like in some other pagan cultures). So him going from a petty jerk to one who worships the ground his mom and sis walk on.

What a great fun story, thanks.

A great fun read!!! Good story development creating lots of anticipation about future chapters.