All Comments on 'Enslaved Ch. 01'

Only one request, just when the action gets hot, the paragraphs get long. If you could split those up my tired old eyes can read them better!

I would love to be Tim in this adventure.

Too much cheating on wives by "supposedly" straight men in your stories. Thought it would be different from your 1st story, (No such luck) and the third is probably the same as well. Too misandrist for my blood.

Simple story concept, nothing too crazy, hot and enjoyable!

Not my cup of tea.