All Comments on 'Enticed by the Sight Ch. 05'
by rockandroller
- 34 Comments
Anonymousalmost 20 years agoThat was so awesome, it definitly made me wet. Now if
I can only get Daddy to read it!!!
Anonymousalmost 20 years agoMy wife likes to leave our bedroom door cracked open so our daughter can watch. and we know she has. It get's us both off when we know she is watching.
Anonymousover 19 years agoWhat a terrific series. Each piece stood on its own as an erotic tale but the whole series wove together into an erotic tapestry. Thank you so much for sharing your vision.
VegasJoeover 19 years agoI am completly amazed with the detailed female point of view from a male author, highly impressive.
Anonymousover 18 years agoI loved the story line....got me hard quick and kept me hard.....hope you continue...maybe with the mother and daughter doing each other while the husband/father watches
Anonymousover 18 years agoWhat a hot story. You are one of the best story tellers I have ever read. How about that threesome with the mother, daughter and father. Or perhaps grandpa could get a piece of the young one.
David48over 18 years agoEven better than the first time. So erotic my teeth hurt. Two generations of Father fuckers. What a concept...and probably more true to reality than the author may have realized. Damn that was hot!
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoI liked this story a lot. very hot. got me excited to say the least..it was definetly planned out well..
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoReally good. Hope to see more along this line. It does get you hot!
Anonymousover 17 years agoWell done on creating a series of very well written stories. Possibly the best written & most evocative I have seen on this site.
thesadwriterover 17 years agoYou are probaly one of the best writers on this site. I just started reading your stories and I look forward to reading more. I stayed up 3 hours later than planned reading this whole series and a couple other stories but it was worth it. Keep up the good work!
hongluoboover 17 years agohot, erotic, believable and beautiful .. and yes i am amazed as well at how well you capture the woman's point of view... (can't help but wonder about my own daughter... )
Anonymousover 16 years agoWhat a great series you have written here! Totally enjoyed every chapter! Well written and flowed effortlessly. Consider me a new fan!
Keep up the great work!
Anonymousover 14 years agoMan I can not help thinking of my own father one of my earliest memories of him was him asleep naked on the couch with an erection I just stared and my Mother lol slapped him and told him to get up and dressed haha
Anonymousover 14 years agoI loved your series! Keep going they are as hot as they are well written.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI just need one more story with the mom and the dad, and lovely Marie. They could have so much fun together.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoSequel Now! Daddy and Daughter embrace their relationship. Then a threesome between Daddy, Mom and Marie.
Anonymousover 12 years agogreat story - all five parts. each one complemented the other. any chance for a chapter6?
MadBrownover 10 years agoTHIS IS A VERY HOT STORY AND FOR THE MOST PART DESERVED A 5 BUT I VERY MUCH DISLIKE THE USE OF DRUGS EVEN THOUGH IT WAS ONLY SLEEPING PILLS. YOU LOST A POINT OR TWO WITH THAT. I LIKED YOUR WRITING AND YOU DON'T NEED TO RESORT TO DRUGS, PLEASE REFRAIN IN THE FUTURE.
Anonymousabout 10 years agoLoved the story and the plot turns! ...dude below, all caps? Really?! Must be an old guy just starting to use computers, lol.
...anyway, would have liked an epilogue where daddy turns his little girl over his lap and spanks her ass HARD for drugging him! Hehe
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoloved the story super hot the sleeping pills was a twist expected from a teen but most awesome of the watching and incest at the same time
Anonymousover 8 years agoOh, so so good! I've missed this one, Im so glad I reread it!
I read it slowly, then backed up and read the good bits a second time to savor this last chapter!
I can see daddy's panic as she walked out and let herself in the front door. Her daughter calmly picks up her shoes and shorts, walks back to her room only pausing long enough by the desk to slip her soaked panties in daddy's sports jacket pocket. A little treasure of a surprise for later!
....again, thanks for writing this!! :)
Sex4lf57over 7 years agoI loved the whole series. Too bad it was written 13 years ago or I'd be asking for more chapters.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoWhat a great story. Your ability to keep the reader involved and in suspense is outstanding. Thank you, "Enticed" is the correct word!
cjkm64626 days agoThe story is great. It felt like it was written by a woman. Thank you very much for the pleasure.
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