All Comments on 'Erin's Wild Week Pt. 03 - Biology Class'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Definite issues with punctuation lacking at both ends of the story.

Can't compare it to others in the series, as I'm unsure if I have read any.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

It was punctuated with jerks and spurts of cum!!!😂

HattrickcockHattrickcock11 months ago

Sorry 2 was ok, being very short and a tease, I thought maybe it was a simple connecting story to build on Erin's horniness and growing lust for cock. But neither 2 nor 3 compare to the first story in the series. You've done very well with developing Erin and Amanda, and you have great descriptions of sex based on 1, I would prefer less teasing and more sex.

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