All Comments on 'Erotic Liaisons with My Neighbour'

Beautifully short and sweet. No extraneous information, all such arousing.

Thank you alwaystaboo.

I know the story is short. But to be honest, for me less is more. Especially when it's designed to be an on going "adventure".

My goal here is to make the reader think the story is longer than it is. That's (hopefully) because they need to pause for a breath and reflect on what they are feeling as they read. I know I did, while writing!

To anyone that emailed, also thank you! Feel free to PM me.

k

Well written. A good start to a variety of possible follow up segments. Looking forward to the next.

.. that while it is short, it is also sweet and chock full of possibilities. I'm looking forward to seeing how you develop this.

Thanks,

T

Check out my writing. Maybe we can collaborate

do I never have neighbours like Susan?

You've wet my appetite.