All Comments on 'Eveline's Strangest Journey Ch. 15'

But then some parents may find out about the arrangement about the locker room and balk a bit? So, maybe the rest of the team will get naked too and play all the rest of their games in the nude. Now, that you can sell tickets too and hopefully the school will get a big boost in ticket sales. Maybe make the cheerleaders be nude as well. Can't wait until Jenny goes to college and has to play naked their too. Eveline still has to find out when she is going to get any of the money she has "earned", or when she is going to get her wallet back, or what plans coach has for her. I always want a happy ending but there are many more chapters to write. Glad you are back writing.

I think more development of feelings without clothes, then in public, then with family would let the reader be in Jenny's shoes. There would be a lot of self-doubt then breakthrough of independence and mindfulness.